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Far away in a land torn with war, she looked for a home. She was not as pretty as doves adorning lush gardens, as exuberant as ducks to play with,neither as useful as pigeons in war. The lonely little cuckoo flew from burnt trees to desolate orchards. A black bird with yellow spots on her feathers that other birds found ugly. She looked for a home where she'd be accepted for who she was. The world hurled poisonous arrows at her. Wounded, she fell in a garden waiting to die until two little human hands cocooned her. A girl nursed her agony and made her feel loved. All her sorrow began to melt and pour as rain on the fiery land. She cried with her heart, her honeyed voice, never heard before. The little girl danced in joy and kissed her wings to let her fly but little cuckoo sang to a world lost in pain, her music blooming pink buds, rushing through blue rivulets, swaying branches with soothing wind, caressing parched souls, raising spirits of warriors with hope. She stayed for love, ecstatic at her newfound lilac tune. She'd found home in a land torn with w ar to dr en ch it wi th h e r di vi ne s o ng. July 11, 2020 Bird Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance La France ~Winner: 1st Place ~Poem of the Day: July 13, 2020 ~Ranked #3 in Best New Poems for July 2020

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Date: 12/9/2023 4:43:00 AM
Di, loved it!
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Date: 8/19/2020 10:52:00 AM
OMG what a poem..loved it..loved ..it..loved it
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Date: 8/17/2020 7:27:00 AM
Great words, sentiments and very clever format! Well, how nice to see that even birds can see others as ugly. Maybe humanity isn't beyond redemption after all! Enjoyed this.
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Date: 8/13/2020 7:58:00 PM
This poem is divine. I loved it. Great work Aditi Congo on your win
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Date: 8/12/2020 7:41:00 PM
A stunning write and visually excellent, a worthy winner I see and extra congrats are in order for POTD, and also this is now on the top100 all time poems I think number 55 or so. A super write Aditi all the accolades will keep coming no doubt. I am so happy for you!
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Date: 7/29/2020 10:30:00 AM
Incredible poetry and form. SImply magnificent. Terri
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Date: 7/26/2020 3:58:00 PM
Words fail me right now. I'll just say FABULOUS--creatively and skillfully composed, relating an uplifting and moving story, Aditi! CONGRATS!! Janice
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/29/2020 3:38:00 AM
Thank you for your visit and such kind appreciation Janice. Your encouraging words mean a lot to me. Much love :)
Date: 7/18/2020 2:42:00 PM
Kudos my friend, what an extraordinary poem, a poem of the highest creativity I have ever seen, a very deserving honor bestowed on you for this awesome POTD. Blessings, and Hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 7/29/2020 3:38:00 AM
Glad you loved it so much Jennifer! It feels great to receive kind appreciation from you with such beautiful words. Blessings and love :)
Date: 7/17/2020 8:18:00 PM
Aditi, this is a visual masterpiece. Wow, you SO deserved the win with this one! Had it been premier contest, for sure a trophy win. Congrats and a fave for me
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Date: 7/29/2020 3:37:00 AM
You are really kind with your encouraging words Andrea! Thank you for being a source of inspiration and for the fav. Much love :)
Date: 7/17/2020 8:18:00 PM
POTD too Wow!
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Date: 7/29/2020 3:36:00 AM
Thanks Andrea! :)
Date: 7/16/2020 4:00:00 AM
Aditi, congratulations on your win in my bird contest with this excellent poem, a FAV for me _Constance
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Date: 7/29/2020 3:36:00 AM
Thank you for your kind appreciation, the fav and my placement in your contest Constance. :)
Date: 7/15/2020 5:40:00 AM
Aditi, it was a joy to read! Congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 7/29/2020 3:36:00 AM
Thank you for your kind appreciation Kim! :)
Date: 7/14/2020 11:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. WOW!!! A great story/poem and shape. Your pen does poems and now shapes. Where can I get one????? Enjoy your win and day..............
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Date: 7/14/2020 1:44:00 PM
I am blessed that you loved my muse Paula. Thank you for your kind words always drenched with love. Much love and blessings :)
Date: 7/14/2020 8:03:00 AM
Love love love this! A fave <3
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Date: 7/14/2020 10:00:00 AM
Glad you love it Maureen. Thank you for the fave. Love :)
Date: 7/14/2020 4:09:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD. This blew me away! A terrific story and a marvelous SHAPE. I have tried these; they are spectacularly difficult I think. Wow! Great job my friend!
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Date: 7/14/2020 10:00:00 AM
Thank you for such kind appreciation dear Caren. Your blessings are a boon to me my friend. Much love :)
Date: 7/13/2020 6:29:00 PM
"A girl nursed her agony and made her feel loved" In times such as these, in a world filled with hate. LOVE is needed. Your presentation is beautiful. There is a wonderful message within. Thank you for that. Congratulations Aditi, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy
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Date: 7/14/2020 9:59:00 AM
Glad you loved my muse Brandy! Thank you for visiting and appreciating my efforts. It means a lot to me. Blessings and love :)
Date: 7/13/2020 2:55:00 PM
Aditi, Congratulations on your POTD honors. I was so impressed by your poem. Excellent !!
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Date: 7/14/2020 9:58:00 AM
Glad you loved it Mike. Thank you for your appreciation. Blessings! :)
Date: 7/13/2020 2:03:00 PM
A beautiful poem of healing and acceptance of one's gifts, Aditi. As Connie said, it is elegant. It is filled with the melody of life renewed and refreshed and given back. I also love the unique shape. Congratulations on POTD and your first place win. Much love and hugs...
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Date: 7/14/2020 9:58:00 AM
Thank you for visiting my page and showering your gracious appreciation Sam. Glad you loved my muse. Blessings and love :)
Date: 7/13/2020 1:31:00 PM
Wow Aditi...I am beyond impressed with not only your bird shape but with the most elegant story you have shared! Your magnificent poem is so worthy of your first place win and POTD! My sincerest congratulations for both honors! I am saving this beauty to my Faves! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 7/14/2020 9:57:00 AM
I am glad you love my words Connie. Thank you for such wonderful appreciation and the fave. Much love and blessings my friend :)
Date: 7/13/2020 11:04:00 AM
It did my heart a world of good to see this beautiful shape poem honored as POTD, Aditi! I'm happy for you, and acknowledge your talent and all the time you spent carefully crafting this little bird and her story. Enjoy the honor; I celebrate it with you. Congratulations, my friend! ~ John
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Date: 7/14/2020 9:57:00 AM
I am really happy to read your generous appreciation my friend. Thank you for sharing my honour. It is a blessing for me. You are a constant source of inspiration to me dear friend. God bless you :)
Date: 7/13/2020 10:54:00 AM
Back With congratulations, very well deserved. Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/14/2020 9:55:00 AM
Thank you for coming back to congratulate me Eve. Much love :)
Date: 7/13/2020 10:01:00 AM
This is such a wonderful and poetic piece AND you put it into an amazing shape...you are such a skilled poetess Aditi. Congrats on your first place AND your POTD with this great poem. :D
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Date: 7/14/2020 9:55:00 AM
I am so happy you love and appreciate my muse Jeanne. Thank you for your kind blessings and lovely encouragement my friend. Blessings and love to you :)
Date: 7/13/2020 9:58:00 AM
A very beautiful, picturesque poem, Aditi! So much love shown in the midst of pain and despair. May love light your path in life always.
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Date: 7/14/2020 9:54:00 AM
I am glad you loved my muse Freddie. Thank you for visiting and for your gracious blessings. God bless you :)
Date: 7/13/2020 9:28:00 AM
This took a lot of work and a lot of talent! Congratulations!
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Date: 7/14/2020 9:06:00 AM
Thank you for appreciating my efforts :) Blessings!
Date: 7/13/2020 8:41:00 AM
Congratulations, Aditi. This is beyond phenomenal. Panagiota
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Date: 7/13/2020 8:53:00 AM
Glad you loved it Panagiota. Thank you for your kind wishes :) Much love!
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