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Walking in to school, not even bothering to be 'cool' Glancing to your right, the world seems to get more bright. And there he sits. Dark, shaggy hair, swaying in his chair. pulling out a peice of gum, wondering if he'll think your dumb. Offering it to him. his eyes meet yours, filing you to the brim. He smiles, Blushing, and you melt. Heart jumping. Pulse racing. giddy with joy. His words seldom heard, but for that your feelings stirred. he smiles and looks away, my heart begins to fray. Before the bell tolls, a small ball of paper rolls, to my hand. I look up to see him blushing, I feel my mind rushing. Opening the note wondering what he wrote.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 6/8/2017 2:09:00 PM
A very beautiful written poem, you do ve a great poetry talent as I ve read your quite a few poems and every poem is way brilliant then other, anyway I ve recently added my new poem we shall never meet each other again, could you plz see it and tell me how is it
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Date: 5/18/2017 12:09:00 AM
nicely done kiddo. Keep it up (7) -JT
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Elissa Quigley
Date: 6/1/2017 6:08:00 PM
Thank you!!
Date: 5/11/2017 12:04:00 PM
Hi Elissa , that was uplifting and wonderful ,,what did he write ,, haha leave them thinking great stuff :)))hugs
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Elissa Quigley
Date: 5/11/2017 1:39:00 PM
thank you, Hugs back. and The note says that he was sorry that he was "unusually shy"....that just made it all the cuter
Date: 5/4/2017 2:28:00 PM
Awesome poem...hope it says meet me at Starbucks
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Elissa Quigley
Date: 5/8/2017 5:17:00 PM
Thank you. I'm too nervouse to open it. ^-^
Date: 5/4/2017 2:27:00 PM
I liked this poem! Say hello to Tom! Haven't seen him around in a while!!! :)
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Elissa Quigley
Date: 5/8/2017 5:17:00 PM
Thank you again. I will

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