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Crimson Locke of Tears

Crimson Locke of Tears These tears my dear darling are dripping like shattered crystals Crystals that could be slowly pouring into a glass of champagne, Why have you left and caused these tears to flow on endlessly? Didn't you know that you've been the one true love even though? We danced all the time neath our rose colored crimson of fine wine A love like ours, I thought we'd live through all the falling, falling rain. For we lived so close to the Crimson Locke rapids of flowing time These tears of mine dear are dripping like shards of shattered crystals, Crystals that could be slowly pouring into a fine glass of champagne. 08/01/2016

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Date: 8/23/2016 7:26:00 PM
I love the form and your image you left behind of the shattered crystal tears , Ava, good write. Thank you for visiting my poem. Hugs Eve
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Ava A. Carlton
Date: 7/12/2017 10:54:00 PM
So sorry it has taken me so long to return any deserved comments. Was gone far too long. Now I sure hope to write more in the near future.
Date: 8/2/2016 2:21:00 AM
A lovely poem of sincere regret of what could have been. Beautifully expressed! I love your metaphor of the shattered crystals Eve : )
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Ava A. Carlton
Date: 8/2/2016 3:05:00 PM
Thank you so very much Connie for your beauty of a comment on this written poem of mine..

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