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Cries of Skies

as if a broken-hearted lover this somber sky cries streams of tears i feel its loneliness beating like a heart against my window I hear its sob through a pained wind as it echoes in the distance i look out its misted grief my disbelief of better days longing again to see it rise then fall like love blushed in crimson hues Bus scribble

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Date: 2/26/2020 2:44:00 PM
You turned the sky into a living, breathing heroine, with whom this reader identified. Amazing, Sandy! Keep 'scribbling!!' :) gw
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Sandra Adams
Date: 2/26/2020 6:48:00 PM
Thank you Gershon...I am sure you get much of the same weather as me...just a day or so sooner... hugs
Date: 2/25/2020 7:52:00 PM
Did the Bus driver speed up a little bit lol...your verse finished first, Sandra...all the best from the Winster...^WW^ :o)
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Date: 2/25/2020 8:54:00 PM
lol... she never speeds with kids on board, likewise with the writes...I had a few minutes today and was bored... thank you for the kind visit and comment :) hugs
Date: 2/25/2020 3:58:00 PM
Oh yes, those bus scribbles...I’m ready for rosier days!
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Date: 2/25/2020 6:55:00 PM
Thank you Kim...I couldn't tell you the last time I saw a pretty sunrise or sunset...seems we have more gray skies and rain than anything for months now... any sun we get comes between the rise and set so there is no color... I am with you on that... hugs
Date: 2/25/2020 3:35:00 PM
Wonderful imagery of a rainy day--I hear the loneliness beating--and echoes of pained wind--beautiful as always, Sandy.
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Date: 2/25/2020 6:54:00 PM
Thank you Vijay...guessing you had the same weather...sigh!
Date: 2/25/2020 2:54:00 PM
Beautiful, sad but so wonderfully written. Your bus scribbles would make anyone wonder why they drive a car or truck. Seriously, your words are always so beautiful my friend. Sigh...
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Sandra Adams
Date: 2/25/2020 6:53:00 PM
thank you Chris...so tired of the same old skies day after day...I am surprised it inspired me today...

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