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Creep

Outcast, undesirable, contemptible, creep. Mantra of a man spurned by humanity. Shadow in the night of darkest mist. Watching, waiting, to ply needed intent. Long is lost the desire to interact. A missing puzzle piece, a void. Seen but unseen, a dour color of drab. A whisper in the voice of the crowd. Steal what is needed no remorse held. Hunger and thirst fill the empty pocket. Kick of a mongrel dog in passing. Scratch of a knife through new car paint. Cold glare, sneer devoid of teeth. Extended grime covered hand in false beseech. Covered in rags, the stench of dark alley. Scavenger, beggar, thief, way of life. Man floats as dust on shifting wind. Motes drift to top, by chance or choice. Some find balance a median richly filled. Yet others lowly settle, there ever to creep. Robert Gene Stoner Jr © 11/17/16

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 12/4/2016 1:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement with this wonderful entry Robert! 7 ; )
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Robert Stoner Jr
Date: 12/4/2016 2:39:00 PM
Thanks for the read and congratulatory visit always appreciated.
Date: 12/2/2016 3:29:00 PM
Many congrats on your top-notch entry and win, Robert. Lainey
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Robert Stoner Jr
Date: 12/4/2016 2:38:00 PM
Thanks Elaine for the read and support for this entry, much appreciated.
Date: 12/1/2016 8:43:00 AM
Hi Robert, Congratulations on your winning write:-) Alexis
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Robert Stoner Jr
Date: 12/1/2016 5:16:00 PM
Thanks Alexis for the congratulatory visit much appreciated
Date: 11/20/2016 1:17:00 PM
Wow Robert, your third stanza really brings out the creep in this poem. I think you ended it perfectly. I hope to see this a top winner. 7 ;
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Robert Stoner Jr
Date: 11/20/2016 3:31:00 PM
Connie how nice of you to drop by with supportive words on this piece, so much appreciated as always. Hope all is well with you and your family, wishing you the best this holiday season.
Date: 11/18/2016 6:36:00 AM
Darkly penned ink, really like the wrap up in that final verse Robert.
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Robert Stoner Jr
Date: 11/20/2016 3:28:00 PM
Thanks Paloma for the read and critique on this creepy writ, much appreciated.
Date: 11/17/2016 10:33:00 PM
Loved the raw imagery of this poem!
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Robert Stoner Jr
Date: 11/20/2016 3:27:00 PM
Thank you Arthur for the read and words of praise on this effort. I always appreciate your input, thanks.
Date: 11/17/2016 5:42:00 PM
So vivid it sounds like you're known a creep or two.
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Robert Stoner Jr
Date: 11/20/2016 3:26:00 PM
Thanks Sunlite for the read and comment, yes I have had the pleasure to have known a few, lol.

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