Crazy

To relax your soul Systematic systematic Towards the road ahead Rhythmatic Rhythmatic Harmonious crazy Crazy Harmonious crazy Crazy She filters the ground Pulsates pulsates The combined realms Deviates deviates Harmonious crazy Crazy Harmonious crazy Crazy Without a word she vomits Congruous congruous Tips her hat over Sumptuous sumptuous Harmonious crazy Crazy Harmonious crazy Crazy The fellowship of tires Righteous righteous Times alleviated system Harmonious harmonious Harmonious Crazy Crazy Harmonious Crazy Crazy To be without a standing Lost upon a riotous landing This world has gone crazy Harmonious crazy! Russell Sivey

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 11/17/2017 10:59:00 AM

Love this ultra-cool poem, Russell. So avant garde poetic acid hip-trip. Keeping one's eyes on the winding road while navigating thru a crazy world is top-notch multi-tasking. And this poem as well is top-notch creativity. Innervision expansion is always a good thing. Gold star poetry. Love and joy always.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 11/13/2017 11:08:00 PM

Ok so now we know! You are as crazy as me!!! Great write!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/13/2017 1:47:00 PM

russell, this is wonderful kind of a looney piece... the replay of words highlights the theme of which you speak... greeat job!..huggs

Caycay Jennings

Date: 11/13/2017 10:08:00 AM

Different and odd in an oddly different good way. The drama underscores the point delivered in engaging lines. I found it thought provoking. All the best ... CayCay

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/13/2017 6:37:00 AM

Good harmony in your poem to depict a crazy world--well done, Russell!