Crashing Waves

I am no longer the shoreline swept up in crashing waves of time where memories reside, and dire dams of water collide within a tender mind. I am the moon pulling the tide. Written 5/24/20

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John Hamilton

Date: 6/3/2020 8:59:00 PM

A wonderful write Rhonda congrats on a fine win!

Jan Allison

Date: 5/30/2020 12:35:00 PM

a powerful piece Rhonda I love the impact of the strength in that final line:-) hugs Jan xx

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 5/30/2020 8:16:00 PM

Thank you, Jan! It's nice to have a visit from you today. I hope you are enjoying your weekend. Hugs to you, Rhonda

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/30/2020 12:16:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. The moon does have a lot of power. They say, full moons have more deaths and babies born. Enjoy your win and day................

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 5/30/2020 8:12:00 PM

So true, Paula. The moon does have a strong presence in nature...thank you for the kind visit! Blessings, Rhonda

Aditi Mishra

Date: 5/30/2020 11:14:00 AM

Rhonda I can relate so much with these words of yours! I actually visualized myself floating with them. This is in my faves. Congratulations on your win :)

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 5/30/2020 8:10:00 PM

Thank you, Aditi! I'm honored that you are keeping my poem in your faves. I'd like to believe that I'm this strong, but really it's someone I strive to be. Blessings, Rhonda

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/30/2020 11:11:00 AM

i like the sense of empowerment depicted in this marvelous verse, rhonda... congrats on you silver medal in my contest...huggs

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 5/30/2020 8:05:00 PM

Thank you, Nette! I enjoy writing for all your contests. I appreciate that you challenge us to try new forms and themes. Have a blessed weekend. xx Rhonda