Cracked and Yellow

The keys await the master's hands, Skilled fingers to dance and lead the band!

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/16/2011 4:12:00 PM

I hope it's the keys of the piano cracked and yellow and not my husband's fingernails.hahaha. (true story unfortunately). This was a nice Crystalline and how cool that you have an assistant priincipal job!! Gosh from your description of TExas weather I swear I thought you were in ONtario.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/10/2011 5:39:00 PM

Ray, please check your Soup mail. I don't care about the length when a poem is that good. Neither does James!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/9/2011 2:31:00 PM

that's right lol the keys on an instrument await to be plays on the masters request, enjoyed your write,..p.d.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/9/2011 8:24:00 AM

Nice picture you have created of the piano playing, Ray

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/8/2011 5:49:00 PM

This one makes me want to dance!! Nice to see you posting your wonderful poetry, Ray! Hope you are doing well, and wishes to you and yours for a Happy New Year !! Carrie

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/8/2011 5:32:00 PM

Nice creative and interesting write on the theme of the contest, Good.luck Ray