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Covetousness

============================== out back of the barn I watch you hitch a wagon to the fine draft mare your last harvest bought 'tis I would be behind her, had I seen her first (and had I a cart) while you travel in comfort, I ruin my good feet why should she be yours?? ============================== Written: 10/28/2018 Contest: Seven Deadly Sins Sponsor: Edward Ibeh

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Date: 10/29/2018 7:40:00 PM
oh I love the way you did this in first person. One of the best I have seen.
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