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Cosmic Crystals

rain washes away all sorrow so there's rosier tomorrow when pearl dreams unfurl empty lies sparks of fireflies design my skies as cosmic crystals I’ll follow

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Bill Baker

Date: 10/27/2023 4:53:00 PM

In so few words, so much hope you offer for a better tomorrow. Your imagery paints a picture of hope for tomorrow. I see below, congratulations are in order for another contest win, my friend. Live today in your very blessed way! Bill

Christina Bowring

Date: 10/24/2023 12:55:00 PM

Congratulations dear Inky on your win in the contest. Hooray! This is a beautiful Quintilla full of poetic magic. Love the last line especially. Beautiful rhyming - told you that you were great at it! ;) Hugs to you :):)

Valsa George

Date: 10/23/2023 9:05:00 PM

So very beautiful. May umpteen stars and fireflies light up your sky. I love this little ditty and into my FAVE.

Paige Hind

Date: 10/23/2023 5:00:00 PM

Beautiful. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/23/2023 1:06:00 PM

- A wonderful poem, Ink :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs

Joseph May

Date: 10/23/2023 12:24:00 PM

Lovely write Empress, Congrats on your win

Eve Roper

Date: 10/23/2023 11:17:00 AM

Back with big congratulations in your win. Hugs my friend

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/22/2023 1:05:00 PM

So beautiful, Ink

Eve Roper

Date: 10/21/2023 9:13:00 PM

Love the imagery and the feeling in this poem. Good luck in the contest. Many blessings my friend

Ink Empress
Date: 10/22/2023 2:45:00 AM

This means alot coming from a talented soul like you, thank you so much

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 10/21/2023 8:31:00 AM

a beautiful Quintilla, Ink. The visual image you created conveyed deep emotion. Rain is such a wonderful symbol of cleansing for the soul; you used it eloquently. I loved 'sparks of fireflies design my skies'--such an outstanding visual for me. Am faving this one, hugs for a splendid Saturday, Sara

Ink Empress
Date: 10/22/2023 2:46:00 AM

Thank you so very much beautiful sara, means alot really, truly grateful for your kind and generous support always

Joe Dimino

Date: 10/21/2023 7:28:00 AM

Indeed, best to follow the condensed truth of Cosmic Crystals. Man is fractured light at his refracting core.... Well said!

Ink Empress
Date: 10/22/2023 3:19:00 AM

Awwn thank you so very much truly for you Kindness

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/21/2023 6:09:00 AM

Dear Ink, your quintilla is an art form due to its excellent rhythm. The visual is made more appealing by your well-picked diction. Your words effortlessly conjure up vivid images. And each line might become a wonderful tapestry of artwork that transports us to a warm, vibrant world. I really love your first line. Despite such tough circumstances, we aspire for a more dignified tomorrow. I wish you the best for the future.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/21/2023 5:59:00 AM

when pearl dreams unfurl empty lies sparks of fireflies design my skies --awesome word painting, Ink. Excellent, as always.

Silent One

Date: 10/21/2023 3:04:00 AM

That first line look familiar... hmmm... isnt that something i say to you? Nice rhymes in your quintilla... simple words that have created imagery... I think Joseph will like this one... we all want a world that illuminates brightly and kindly.. I hope we can all have a rosier tomorrow and walk in gardens full of beautiful scents and enigmatic blossoms... good luck in the contest dear..

Ink Empress
Date: 10/21/2023 3:12:00 AM

*rolls my eyes” dont sue me. How much??? Tell me

Silent One
Date: 10/21/2023 3:11:00 AM

won't be the first time.. lol :D :D

Ink Empress
Date: 10/21/2023 3:08:00 AM

Yea lol when u hear something too many times, its stuck in my brain like a bird song. Sorry if i plagiarized your speech lololol :D

Lioness Onpaper

Date: 10/21/2023 2:33:00 AM

Ooooo love the flow!! sparks of fireflies design my skies!!! Love that line… like a surreal night!!! as cosmic crystals I’ll follow.. mmmmm gorgeously written papi

Hiya Sharma

Date: 10/21/2023 2:28:00 AM

Dear Ink, your magical wordplay never ceases to surprise me!! What a gorgeous quintilla this is, with splendid flow, resplendent rhymes, mesmerizing imagery and fascinating poetic weaving.. I am in love with the title of this poem, especially.. Wow, cosmic crystals, I'm sure they shimmer in a lustrous way, studded so beautifully in your golden heart! "rosier tomorrow", "when pearl dreams unfurl empty lies", "sparks of fireflies design my skies " I wish to follow those cosmic crystals/stars too

Hiya Sharma
Date: 10/21/2023 2:30:00 AM

I also adore the enchanting thought of fireflies designing your sky, sooo breathtaking! You definitely paint a whimsical and gorgeous world with your words.. Best of luck to you for the contest :)

Deb M

Date: 10/21/2023 2:25:00 AM

Simply beautiful IE!! Debx