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Cormorant

alert cormorant dives for fish in eventide … …hooked prey hears death knell Written on 3/18/2022 For Bird Haiku contest Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/7/2022 9:50:00 PM
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I sure like this one, Laura. Thanks for paying me a recent visit.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/7/2022 12:51:00 PM
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Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. I am sure that its prey felt it was time to pray but does a cormorant know about death and the hereafter? I enjoyed reading your work. Thanks for the visit to my page. Your comment was uplifting. Sara
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Laura Leiser
Date: 5/7/2022 1:03:00 PM
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Thanks do commenting on this one, Sara! It didn’t place, but that’s okay. Glad you enjoyed it! :)
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John Watt
Date: 4/5/2022 10:00:00 PM
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Two in a row about birds of prey seeking their evening meal... wonderful! Excellent imagery in haiku form. I am suddenly hungry for a fish sandwich, lol. Great writing, best wishes in the contest ~ John
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Laura Leiser
Date: 4/6/2022 10:04:00 AM
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Happy you liked this one, John! I watch the birds by our sailboat a lot…they are obsessed with fishing for their food, of course!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/23/2022 5:53:00 AM
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Great use of words! Fantastic haiku! Fave!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 3/23/2022 9:05:00 PM
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Thank you so much, Kim! I truly appreciate your kind comments and thanks for the fave! :)
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Silent One
Date: 3/21/2022 2:35:00 PM
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Vivid imagery...Great haiku..
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Laura Leiser
Date: 3/21/2022 8:13:00 PM
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Thank you, Silent! Your comments mean so much to me :)
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Valsa George
Date: 3/19/2022 4:14:00 AM
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Beautiful Haiku ! All the Best in the contest, Laura !
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Laura Leiser
Date: 3/19/2022 4:01:00 PM
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Thank you, Valsa! I’m happy you liked this! :)
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Jan Allison
Date: 3/18/2022 3:39:00 PM
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superb imagery Laura xx
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Laura Leiser
Date: 3/18/2022 3:42:00 PM
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Thank you very much, Jan! I appreciate your positive comments! Glad you liked it! :)

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