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Hello? Is Jack there? Speaking...who is calling please? I am Jack too, with something important to share. Really? Your name is Jack and you have something to say to me? Jack, I know all about your life All your troubles and all your strife, I know what happens in your head, What you enjoy and what you dread . How can you know all these things? Only I know who I really am. How I deal with what life brings, And whether I fall or stand . Jack, I know all you have done and said Because I am you 25 years ahead. I was there ,I heard those voices And I am the result of each of those choices. You are me? How can it be? Almost too hard to believe. Yes I am you, a more seasoned you With more than just a pointer or two. Well thanks for calling I appreciate that, Now about my life Let's chat! 9/6/16

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Date: 9/6/2016 8:14:00 AM
Next to last verse, change "to" to "too". What a fun poem, a chat with yourself. That would be strange. I wonder if Jack and Jack will argue? LOL
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Jack Eldridge
Date: 9/6/2016 11:08:00 AM
Thanks Kim We do
Date: 9/6/2016 6:34:00 AM
Ha ha great conversation well done x
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Jack Eldridge
Date: 9/6/2016 11:08:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 9/6/2016 5:40:00 AM
An interesting write.. i enjoyed.. //blessings
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Jack Eldridge
Date: 9/6/2016 11:09:00 AM
Glad you enjoyed! Thanks for reading

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