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Coming of Age

My eldest brother, nine years old, Thought he could break a horse. Our mother strictly forbade him. A mother’s right of course. Her young son mustered all his wiles, Hoping he could sway her. Unwilling to be defeated, He vowed to disobey her. He gathered a rope and bridle, Went to the big corral. He was there to break a wild colt, Three brothers there to yell. Our youngest brother, four years old Yelled, “I’ll tell Ma on you Unless you take me up there And give me a ride too.” In his eagerness to hush him, His big brother agreed And lifted him to the bare back Of that big, trembling steed. Our father came in nick of time To salvage little brother, Then watched as his son rode that colt. No one told our mother.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/5/2011 11:35:00 AM
Congrats Joyce on having this poem make it to first round competition in the PS contest..good luck my friend..luv..
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Date: 8/2/2011 6:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest Joyce. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/2/2011 11:55:00 AM
Joyce, congratulations on making it to the first round with this wonderful write. Best to you~ Caryl
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Date: 8/2/2011 9:39:00 AM
Joyce, Good Luck! Congratulations on your poem's capture of the first round. Agape, Moses
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Date: 8/2/2011 4:05:00 AM
Superb writing Joyce. Congratulations on making it through the first round and best wishes on making it to the Finals. Lainie
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Date: 6/5/2011 8:10:00 AM
A wonderful write Joyce. It is so funny how mothers of each generation did not know everything. I enjoyed the read and the trip back to childhood. Caryl
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Date: 6/4/2011 7:19:00 AM
What a lovely poem Joyce! This poem cuts straight into the A-typical boyish brotherly escapades of growing into maturity, all while under the careful grooming of loving parents. I find your story very refreshing and honestly endearing. Good job! It's the poems that are born of life's lessons that reflect the best of us and that's why I try to only write about what I know best to be truth. Congrats on this worthy poem being featured and may the Lord keep and direct you, love Tim.
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Date: 5/31/2011 7:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved feature this week Joyce. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/30/2011 6:52:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Joyce
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Date: 5/29/2011 4:46:00 PM
Joyce~ Congratulations on your featured poem of the week.. Nice to stop by and check out all featured poem. Have a wonderful day~always,..p.d.
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Date: 5/29/2011 4:17:00 PM
What a wonderful story, Joyce. Congrats on having it featured. Vince
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Date: 5/4/2011 6:38:00 AM
A delightful poem! A great story told well!
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Date: 3/30/2011 11:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your lariat poet nomination for this poem, Joyce. Not surprised! Reading me made me feel like I was right there watching this happen! Breaking a wild cold will remain on my bucket list, but at least I have the three-day fishing trip at the end of May. One down -- 9 more bucket items to go! Do you know anyone who'd like to go skydiving or hang-gliding with me? Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/30/2011 10:22:00 AM
Breaking a wild colt must be dangerous, Joyce, but it's actually something I would like to try. How cool that everyone stuck together and no one told your mother what your oldest brother was doing. Families had a special unity years ago and much of it seems to be lost now. A good example of this type of unity can be found in the movie "Legends of the Fall." The brothers all looked out for each other. Wonderful poem, Joyce, I felt like I was watching this memory. Love, Carolyn
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