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Come Take Your Fill

Come fly with me in sweetshop dreams throw caution’s doubt into the wind laugh your face to pleasured lines come board my plain and simple need.. oh let our bodies shed their gloom see there.. before us distant laid a flushed horizon’s fading glow a green garbed castle in the sky.. all puckered you with mannish frown.. and doubts a’plenty in your mind let rich selection fill your wings come pick and mix all freedom find sweet doubting heart. Come take your fill a silk wrapped love here merry brings.. No liqu’rice threads or nougat feel but more, a rich confectioned place brim-full with honeyed almond strands .. dark chocolate dipped ripe raspberries hand held upon your sweetheart’s tongue, a soaring flight of fancy brought swirled an' twirled with sherbet fizz to soon electrify a place, where is a melting pot, rich roistering awaiting weight of other’s sin.. so thus the weekend starts its test with chocolatiers’s amazing craft admired is he by others skilled who knows full well he sells the best..

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Date: 2/15/2018 5:06:00 AM
Am I allowed to be my own reviewer - in which case: perhaps too long, words flung together in an incomprehensible way.. metaphorically ridiculous?!
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