Come My Love

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Poetry/Rhyme/Come My Love
Copyright Protected, ID 04-1635-568-11
All Rights Reserved, 2024, Constance La France

Written, April 11, 2024
For the International Contest, No. 1300
Sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged, 04/13/2024

Tenth Place

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Oh, come in the dark of night, come in the silence of a dream, come with sweet kisses that delight, flow down to me on a moon beam, come my love to dry my tears, for I have wept for years and years.

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Unseeking Seeker

Date: 4/13/2024 11:12:00 PM

Outstanding! A fav for me. Congratulations on your win, Constance

Constance La France
Date: 4/15/2024 5:30:00 PM

Seeker, thank you so much for the great compliment, the FAV and congratulations, appreciate, hugs

Joanna Daniel

Date: 4/13/2024 4:33:00 AM

Lovely poignancy:)

Constance La France
Date: 4/15/2024 5:30:00 PM

Joanna, thank you for the compliment and comment, hugs

Stephan McBride

Date: 4/12/2024 1:00:00 PM

Beautiful, shine this love into the heart. : ) to fill that empty void

Constance La France
Date: 4/15/2024 5:30:00 PM

Stephan, thank you for the compliment and comment, hugs

Jay Narain

Date: 4/12/2024 10:01:00 AM

Sentimental poem. Nicely penned.

Constance La France
Date: 4/15/2024 5:31:00 PM

Jay, thank you for the compliment and comment, hugs

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 4/11/2024 5:43:00 PM

Your words deeply touched me, Constance. I felt like I was in a dreamlike state as I read your poem, its words making me misty-eyed. Such poignancy and sadness in your poem, but still a delight to read. Enjoy your evening, Sara

Constance La France
Date: 4/11/2024 6:06:00 PM

Sara, thank you for the lovely comment, I got a bit misty writing it too, hugs