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Colorado Storm

It splinters the sky Light abounding Blocking the sun Blackness surrounding Crackling for miles Its loud but exciting Shattering my thoughts Its rain so inviting A wall of clouds Moving and tortured Here comes the danger Beauty enraptured A drum beat, a flash A deafening sound Heavy rain falling On wet, sodden ground

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Date: 10/1/2011 9:08:00 PM
What a vivid description of a storm. Almost wanted to be out in it.Thanks for your visit and encouraging words my friend. :)
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Date: 8/25/2011 1:21:00 PM
I live in Denver and have for 34 years and i can relate to this one. a great piece you wrote.
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Date: 8/16/2011 11:04:00 PM
Hi sweetie, Amazing images of the storm in your verse. I find storms so exciting and love to be out in it. You tell it so well.
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