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Collaborating In the Clouds

I set out in the middle of the night Unaware of my destination And up I looked I saw the itinerant clouds And suddenly I was followed Escorted by the clouds My destiny yet unrevealed Together we sailed Hoping to find shelter She was like a mother-hen Even though she was Pregnant And her time to deliver has come She covered me all along And I was king of the horizon

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/9/2012 7:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved placement in P. D.'s "Clouds" contest Chuck. Love, Carol
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Chuck Anuforo
Date: 7/13/2012 9:57:00 AM
Thanks a whole lot, just got to know I was mentioned.
Date: 7/9/2012 1:38:00 AM
Chuck congrats on your win...David
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Date: 7/7/2012 11:54:00 PM
Chuck, congratulations with your beautiful collaboration in the clouds. Read every poem over and over. Thank you for the support, God Bless :-) PD
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Chuck Anuforo
Date: 7/13/2012 10:01:00 AM
I'm indeed elated... thank you for reading my poem.
Date: 6/30/2012 4:58:00 PM
"Good poem, Chuck. I love it. Love, Toquyen"
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Chuck Anuforo
Date: 7/13/2012 10:00:00 AM
Thanks a lot for reading my poem, do expect better ones.

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