Coda

Humans are moving into space and beyond The planet they call home will soon be dead and gone They succeeded doing what none did before Killing a planet where life prospered millions of years or more Destruction began with animal resources Then draining the earth of all its life forces Earth's atmosphere didn't escape the decimating act It was the last to go in actual fact They built a space vehicle …a latter day Noah's ark And they're now lost in space in cosmos' frozen dark They haven't a plan on where they'll go But found the universe is a rocky horror picture show

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David Smith

Date: 7/15/2016 12:05:00 AM

That is one ending glaringly scary. Just a matter of whether they decide to use inventions that have all the answers to heal this planet with some to take with them on spaceship. Here in little Kiwi land we can turn cow poo into water ever so pure and that is just the start. My hope will not be given up lightly, Need poems like yours to make others see. Very well written. Particularly like ending. David from NZ

Elizabeth Smith
Date: 7/15/2016 12:51:00 AM

Well thank you David. I don't know if you've heard but they are even now making mention to this sort of possibility. They know planet earth is being depleted. So what's the next move? Appreciate your comment.