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Cobweb Dream

Cobweb Dream by Shirley Rebstock During the night, I had a dream What in the world did it mean I was bringing this patient to a doctor it seemed I was not sure as it was getting late If they would even see him on this date Or would he have a long wait This is where I work I told him with pride As we went up the stairs more narrow than wide Recently, returning from a long train ride Dark and dingy walking through the hall Even seeing dirt under the stalls, "Oooooh cobwebs" on the ceiling way up tall At the top of the stairs, we opened a door A sticky cobweb fell on our head then onto the floor "Oooooh cobwebs" sticking to what we wore On the other side of the door were doctors so kind, Working late, not seeming to mind Caring for patients while most people dined While waiting for the patient, I wondered who was to blame For letting the cobwebs become so untamed Either they were lazy or off their game I wondered if the cobwebs were always there High up on the ceiling where I did not stare Even if I had, would I have cared It made me ponder the cobwebs on my soul Maybe they need a good cleaning to make me whole So on my life and others they would not take a toll So rather than blame or ignore I asked the patient on his return,"Do you have cobwebs on your door That fall from the ceiling to the floor?" What is the meaning of this dream Is it my soul that needs to be redeemed Or just the office needs to be cleaned

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Date: 6/19/2018 5:57:00 PM
wow, your first poem posted. It's so profound. I have such WEIRD dreams, and many show no meaning, but yours I think does have a very deep meaning as you suggested in this poem
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Shirley Rebstock
Date: 6/20/2018 9:08:00 AM
Thank you and thank you for writing beautiful poems and giving flowers of support to me and others
Date: 9/26/2017 10:51:00 AM
Just taking in your first post here on soup, love the theme, and the cobweb, which the spider weaves, like yourself a weaver of wonderful words...
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Shirley Rebstock
Date: 9/26/2017 11:52:00 PM
Thank you very much. I almost forgot this one.
Date: 6/30/2017 11:51:00 AM
Makes us think. Cobwebs go off in so many different directions. Where does it find us? Nicely done.
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Shirley Rebstock
Date: 7/2/2017 3:09:00 PM
Thanks
Date: 6/5/2015 8:56:00 AM
Quite an entertaining poem, Shirley! Those cobwebs must have turned into a nightmare! They say that dreams do have a meaning; your final two lines appear to lead to a solution! // paul
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Shirley Rebstock
Date: 6/5/2015 9:26:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 6/4/2015 9:08:00 PM
This poem is highly entertaining with an enclosed serious message. Welcome to the soup!
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Shirley Rebstock
Date: 6/5/2015 9:25:00 AM
Thank you so much
Date: 5/10/2015 10:48:00 AM
Shirley :) Congratulations on having your poem featured this Mothers Day. SKAT love
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Shirley Rebstock
Date: 5/11/2015 12:52:00 PM
Just saw this. What a nice suprise. Thank you
Date: 4/26/2015 6:18:00 PM
thank you for the reply Shirley
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Date: 4/26/2015 1:14:00 AM
Shirley, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Shirley Rebstock
Date: 5/2/2015 11:27:00 AM
Thank you, you are welcome to be my poetry friend.
Date: 4/21/2015 10:28:00 PM
Shirley, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@
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Shirley Rebstock
Date: 4/29/2015 2:50:00 PM
Thank you, hoping to have some time off from work to be able to read other's poems.
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Shirley Rebstock
Date: 4/25/2015 8:35:00 PM
Thank you again, One question, do you have to be a premium member to enter a contest, meaning pay a year's subscription?
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Shirley Rebstock
Date: 4/25/2015 7:01:00 PM
Thank you. just found this site. Enjoy reading others poems too.
Date: 4/21/2015 1:57:00 PM
- Hello Shirley - I want to welcome you to the P-Soup - You have come to the right place, here you will find many talented poets :) - Share your work, try two get some "poets" friends :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Shirley Rebstock
Date: 4/21/2015 5:29:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 4/21/2015 2:36:00 AM
Interesting piece Shirley, Enjoyed your poetry on cobwebs Does get you thinking!! Have a nice day Kevin
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Shirley Rebstock
Date: 4/21/2015 7:09:00 AM
Yep and thanks

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