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Clouds of many forms, shifting in the sky, Fading in and out, quietly passing by. Seeing floating forms in full animation, Requires a reset of mind’s vibration. For one must look deeply beyond mere sight, To see all the shapes in the dark and light. Open channels of imagination, Now you recognize the mind’s creation. Cloud after cloud they begin to connect, You still can’t decide just what to expect. Coming into focus from bleak contrast, The things you are seeing just cannot last. Seeing with faith through an opened mind’s eye, Created wonders in creation’s sky.

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 2/5/2024 6:43:00 PM

"For one must look deeply beyond mere sight, To see all the shapes in the dark and light. Open channels of imagination,..." Such profound words Bill. I really enjoyed this one. Thank you dear friend :)

Bill Baker
Date: 2/5/2024 10:01:00 PM

Walking around with my head in the clouds is a good thing to me. :-) Go to see your name moving on up in Community Building, my dear friend. :-) Your poet friend right here in Texas, Bill

Sotto Poet

Date: 2/5/2024 10:20:00 AM

Dear friend, Bill, your sonnet is truly remarkable. It elegantly delves into the profound concept of perception and imagination by employing the imagery of clouds, portraying them as dynamic entities, forever in a state of flux and progression within the heavens. The portrayal of clouds as "Fading in and out, quietly passing by" evokes a deep sense of transience and impermanence, accentuating the ephemeral nature of life. Your work continues to exhibit a sense of fluidity and coherence.

Bill Baker
Date: 2/5/2024 5:35:00 PM

Thanks for the in depth, insightful thoughts on my poetry, my dear friend. You lift me up when I am unstable. I want to write poetry that is as good as your comments. Bill

Jay Narain

Date: 2/5/2024 9:27:00 AM

Inspiring poem. I have been watching atmospheric river and pineapple express clouds for many weeks, Evn with mighty rain, the ferocious clouds disappear or move on. Many inspirations to look into.

Bill Baker
Date: 2/5/2024 5:37:00 PM

Yes, they are, Jay. Clouds can be very inspiring. Bill

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 2/5/2024 5:37:00 AM

Through imagination, even the simplest things can give us great inspiration. One of my favorite pastimes.

Bill Baker
Date: 2/5/2024 5:43:00 PM

A great way to feel the possibilities in life as we age, Jerry. Clouds can be very enjoyable. Bill

Yann Rolland

Date: 2/5/2024 12:43:00 AM

this is so creative, you made clouds watching a science in few precious words, enjoyed this beauifu poem,thanks poet

Bill Baker
Date: 2/5/2024 5:45:00 PM

Thank you for reading my poetry, Yann. Have a pleasant day! Bill

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/4/2024 6:29:00 PM

love it, Bill. Nothing better than reflecting on the clouds' shapes and 'meanings.'

Bill Baker
Date: 2/4/2024 8:37:00 PM

Something to do while out walking. Thanks for the comments, gw. BB

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 2/4/2024 4:38:00 PM

I love cloud watching with you, hubby! We both let our imaginations take hold and we let things 'connect'..it's exhilarating for we know not what to expect. You're right, seeing with faith with an opened mind's eye...those words are truly brilliant, hugs from your fellow cloud watcher :-)

Bill Baker
Date: 2/4/2024 5:57:00 PM

We do find our heads in the clouds on occasion, LOL. Thanks for reading and commenting on my poetry, my Cuddles. Hugs, Bill

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 2/4/2024 3:37:00 PM

This reminds me of so many times, cloud watching... such soft, still blessings. Love this. God bless you always. Love, Gina

Bill Baker
Date: 2/4/2024 5:58:00 PM

Thank you, Gina. You're a blessing to my day, my friend. Have a pleasant week! Bill

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/4/2024 1:24:00 PM

Plenipotentiary clouds of faith! I loved the open sky clouds of Arizona. A poet sees them whilst others miss the beauty! Oh the horse rides with the cowboys…did they even consider? Hmm…

Bill Baker
Date: 2/4/2024 6:01:00 PM

I imagine they did around sunset ... weary from a long day's work, sitting there on a log just gazing up at the sky. Makes me tired thinking about it, but it would be peaceful and soothing, I imagine. Thanks for the comments, my friend. Have a pleasant week. Bill

Silent One

Date: 2/4/2024 10:58:00 AM

My dear friend Bill, how sweet your sonnet beautifully explores the theme of perception and imagination through the imagery of clouds.. depicting clouds as dynamic entities, constantly shifting and evolving in the sky. The description of clouds "Fading in and out, quietly passing by" evokes a sense of transience and impermanence, highlighting the fleeting nature of their forms... great flow as always..

Bill Baker
Date: 2/4/2024 6:03:00 PM

I can imagine a timeless God, saying the same thing about his creation, man. Thanks for the visits and comments, my friend. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/4/2024 10:51:00 AM

A favourite pastime of mine especially in summertime when cotton clouds are passing by, I always look for images . not many can see them, pareidolia I think it it's called. Hope your weekend is going good well Bill. Tom

Bill Baker
Date: 2/4/2024 5:56:00 PM

I see images in a lot of everyday things, myself. It still surprises me the connections minds can make with the undefined shade we encounter. Thanks for the comments, Tom. Cheers, my friend! Bill