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Beginnings are endings. We wander in circles. Closed path integral – zero, promising potential. We arrive where we started, but with more wisdom. Endings are beginnings. 10/17/2017

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Date: 9/17/2018 1:26:00 PM
Love the circularity in this piece, Agnes.
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Date: 10/31/2017 9:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this philosophical write, Agnes, I don't think I understand it fully yet:)
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 10/31/2017 6:48:00 PM
Thank you, Jo. I am not sure i understand it either :)
Date: 10/27/2017 11:05:00 AM
This has a philosophical slant to it, Agnes. So I take it that, the more laps we do, the wiser we become! Then, in the last lap we reach the maximum! Regards // paul
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 10/31/2017 6:49:00 PM
Thank you, Paul. Perhaps this is what it means.
Date: 10/22/2017 8:51:00 PM
very good to see this one in top three. Congrats, Agnes.
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 10/25/2017 8:35:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea.
Date: 10/21/2017 6:39:00 PM
Many congrats Agnes I love the direction you took with the theme:-) hugs jan xx
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 10/25/2017 8:35:00 PM
Thank you, Jan.
Date: 10/21/2017 5:43:00 PM
Agnes, congratulations on your win well done..I love the part but with more wisdom :) Hugs Eve ~`*
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 10/25/2017 8:35:00 PM
Thank you, Eve.
Date: 10/21/2017 5:08:00 PM
a creative effort well rewarded... applause to you for a great win, agnes, and thanks for being part of this contest..
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 10/25/2017 8:34:00 PM
Thank you very much for my win, Nette - I am so glad you liked my poem.
Date: 10/17/2017 3:27:00 PM
that is SO nice for someone who does not share my feelings on the afterlife, but I know you believe at least something of each individual goes on! Great writing as usual, Agnes. About triolet form, you should visit them in the search engine. Or see more of mine by clicking "form" I have written many many in this lovely little form and Lucidity is not my best work in that form. Anyway, I'm glad you liked it.
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 10/17/2017 3:31:00 PM
Thanks for your kind words, Andrea. I will check out the triolets, sounds like lots of fun.
Date: 10/17/2017 3:09:00 PM
Wonderful Agnes, in an engaging minimalist sort of way...
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 10/17/2017 3:31:00 PM
Thanks, Charlie.
Date: 10/17/2017 2:52:00 PM
Fabulous pen Agnes! My best to you for the contest! :) xomo
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 10/17/2017 3:03:00 PM
Thank you, Maureen.