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A flook hospital visit would forever change me last person I would have thought to ever see I thought your love was finally going to come little did I know the pain it would have brung I should have just let you finally go But I had to hope one last time as your daughter before I would forever let you go sometimes a mother can not love, this child she birthed sorrow for her sorrow for me sorrow for her grand-babies It's time to finally move on this church is now becoming our family I'm feeling the joy and to be blessed I am beginning to feel my heart at rest they except me and my family this is just the way it ought to be I have so much love inside me The time trying to make you see is time now spent loving my family If you decide to see it in time you will be aright for I'm not hard to find

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Kim Morrison

Date: 6/8/2013 8:13:00 AM

Again you write with a lot of passion here, but you have a few minor mistakes that take away from it. You do not need the first "I." The "atrest" should have a space between "at" and "rest." "Brung" should be brought and "ourt" should be ought. You might have been going for a dialect here, but unless the rest is written that way they look like errors. Good Job! Kim