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Close To End

I am close to end. I am as a falling star Bright, close to its end

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 12/7/2017 12:28:00 AM
Noh u r a bright poetic star that needs to keep glowing without falling. This was a creative fabulous haiku!! Kudos.
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Mario De Paz
Date: 12/7/2017 8:58:00 AM
Thank you for coming and commenting
Date: 11/14/2017 9:52:00 AM
Dear Mario: Hope you are OK. All the best then, Leon.
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Mario De Paz
Date: 11/14/2017 10:11:00 AM
yes, Leon, I am well, although close to end. Thanks for coming

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