Cloaked and Soaked

Isolated here Feathers cloaked and soaked Oil's not the answer

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Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 5/18/2010 5:27:00 PM

I wish you Good fortune in the contest Ray with this cool thought provoking Haiku. Robert

Date: 5/14/2010 8:43:00 PM

Interesting perspective on the topic. The oil spill sure is a sad situation. There has to be a way to balance the needs of humans and nature. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us and for your kind comment. Karen

Eleanore Bourner

Date: 5/13/2010 5:02:00 PM

good luck in the contest! ------Ell

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/13/2010 3:32:00 PM

Perfect words Ray for the new contest photo and good luck my friend.. looks like a big winner to me.. very cool title in rhyme.. luv. from the "Sweetheart"