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Cleaving

You stripped the jungles of the world You blew the hunting horn You chased the beasts out of the field You pricked the bloody thorn You drove the leper from the streets You martyred men of war You stood on mountains made of steel Molten, to the core With words of want you praised your gods As children took up arms You cleaved the tumor from the wound – The cancer wasn’t gone You hid the truth within yourself You never could believe You were the blight that wrecked the cell Yourself it was You sought to cleave –

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Date: 4/4/2024 3:32:00 AM
Very powerful and well written John with great rhyming. A very thought provoking read with profound lines. ‘ you pricked the bloody thorn’ ‘ you hid the truth within yourself’ - great lines. Certainly lessons that should be learned as you said and the sooner the better. Really enjoyed this reflective poem. Thank you for sharing.
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John Oldham
Date: 4/5/2024 2:56:00 PM
Thanks, Christina! Appreciate your kudos!
Date: 4/2/2024 4:46:00 AM
I always appreciate great rhyming and this - complete with subject - is great rhyming John. Cheers - Gary
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John Oldham
Date: 4/2/2024 5:56:00 PM
Appreciate it, Gary. Thanks -
Date: 3/28/2024 6:50:00 PM
Raw- sounds like a lesson learned
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John Oldham
Date: 4/2/2024 5:55:00 PM
Or lessons NOT learned! Thanks for the comment, Paige. Best, John

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