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Clandestine Union

For so long she had chained her thoughts , and strangled her desires. But his irresistible smile and flamboyant words had ignited fire . As tender words would no longer encapsulate Physical desires would eventually perpetuate, a clandestine union Between these ancient lovers.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/19/2016 8:30:00 AM

Passionate work..Thanks for stopping b y..Sara

John-Ovan.P. Hull

Date: 3/12/2016 10:23:00 AM

It's such a shame that she has to repress such beautiful feelings.

Constance La France

Date: 3/9/2016 9:54:00 PM

Red, your words are fire, wonderful write, 7 ~

Daniel Turner

Date: 3/7/2016 2:16:00 AM

Very sensuous. I am a big fan of brevity. Your poems pack quite the punch! Peace young lady:)

Red Fiery
Date: 3/7/2016 9:38:00 PM

thank u my dear

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/6/2016 9:18:00 PM

I thank you for sharing a lovely and passionate moment.... A high 7 and hug from me to you. LINDA

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/6/2016 7:15:00 AM

Steamy! It's good to see you are inspired.

Paul Callus

Date: 3/6/2016 6:50:00 AM

In the end love and passion have their way...such feelings cannot be held forever captive. Once again, a short poem which is capable of expressing full emotions! ~ Regards // paul

Keith O.J. Hunt

Date: 3/4/2016 5:11:00 PM

Fabulous piece, so much said with very little! Keith;-)

Red Fiery
Date: 3/4/2016 8:26:00 PM

Thank you !

Eileen Manassian

Date: 3/4/2016 12:31:00 PM

You have a lovely way with words, dear....Passion in every line. We need more of this kind of poetry. Hugs

Red Fiery
Date: 3/4/2016 5:10:00 PM

Thank you so much!