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Clandestine Sinners

Clandestine Sinners HE Rises against her TIDES The perfume she wears is bound to hypnotise His insatiable desires are well acquainted with her thoughts Uninhibitedly, he unties all her knots His soul coalesced with her cinnamon skin For two strangers were ready to sin Copyright @ 2016 by Redfiery

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James Marshall Goff

Date: 4/22/2017 9:18:00 AM

Line 9 in symbiosis with line 10...nicely done!

Debbie Duncan

Date: 4/15/2017 1:15:00 AM

Love it :)

Arthur Vaso

Date: 10/30/2016 7:32:00 PM

Sounds more like love than sin! Loved this

Paul Callus

Date: 10/24/2016 4:00:00 PM

Hi Red...I bet that perfume is called 'seduction'! She knows what she's after, and the same applies to him! Hugs // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/18/2016 3:20:00 PM

wow, that is a sexy poem, Red Fiery. I Like it A LOT. SEVEN

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/24/2016 11:49:00 PM

hello My, dearest Red Fiery, I'm so glad to read this very tasty poem. The imagery is breathtaking. my-my on the ending... Love it. LINDA

Just James

Date: 9/13/2016 2:42:00 PM

Subtly brilliant! Well done!

Caycay Jennings

Date: 9/5/2016 10:40:00 PM

If this is related to addiction (saw SO's remark), I didn't get it - I truly thought man + woman = sin in a clever poem. I like it very much, as I took it .. CayCay