Circles In a Circle

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Intersection at Center of the Great Circle No breaking through the black line Are they circles though? Or people in the center Fleeing or huddling or still Motion can't be seen Motivation can't be known Not circles. Not people. Eyes. April 28, 2017

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Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 5/25/2017 8:33:00 PM

GREAT choice, Andrew! I love Kandinsky's colorful abstracts, that hearken masters like Chagall and Picasso, but have their own life and style. He is unafraid to explore bright, solid colors and shapes, and often goes to distinct angles and contrasts that many artists avoid. I love that, and love your wonderful tribute! Well-earned - congrats!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/25/2017 8:04:00 PM

I really love your interpretation of the painting. You seem to have delved deeply into this artist's imaginative piece inspiring a superb ending! Congratulations on your wonderful second placement Andrew! 7 ; )

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/25/2017 7:42:00 AM

Wow, Andrew! I can almost see you staring at the painting and coming to your wonderful conclusion! It was when I read it out loud that I had that aha moment!

Andrew Jacob Jung
Date: 5/26/2017 10:34:00 PM

Thanks! Great contest.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/24/2017 11:56:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in my contest! Indeed, our PS art gallery is divine! I will return to comment on your individual poem. Blessings...Kim