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Circle

If words were more than just a letter's hope, And fools were all that seemed to understand. If dreams were more than tumbles down a slope, And gifts were placed within the giver's hand. Draw forth great visions from the peasant hearts. Sculpt worlds where sons of suns bring rays of light. Shout! Why? To whispered streams wisdom imparts. Follow the blind beyond the gift of sight. Wind's syllables dance on the ancient trees. Expressions left within the grains of life, Where prayers are dusted from the savior's knees, And given to the husband and the wife. Then sprinkled to desires far below, Become the circle, round and round we go.

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Date: 3/13/2017 8:54:00 AM
Very clever write and beautiful too. Warm regards, Laura.
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Robert Nehls
Date: 3/19/2017 8:09:00 AM
Thanks a lot, Laura. Happy that you liked this one..... Robert.
Date: 6/9/2014 4:09:00 PM
Robert, thank you for the reply on my comment ..Linda
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Date: 6/9/2014 7:27:00 AM
Hello Robert, , Congratulations on having your poem Featured on the Poetry Soups Home Page. Enjoy the coming week. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Robert Nehls
Date: 6/9/2014 12:24:00 PM
Thank you so much, Linda. I'm not sure how poems get featured, but it's nice to see it there. You have a wonderful week, my dear.....Robert.
Date: 6/9/2014 7:22:00 AM
A piece of good poetry. Keep it up and congrats on your poem selected to be featured, ROBERT
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Robert Nehls
Date: 6/9/2014 12:20:00 PM
Thanks for the encouragement, Dr. Ram. I'm happy you liked it...... Robert.
Date: 5/31/2014 12:53:00 PM
wow, this one is deep. this one is GOOD. I think your best one I've yet seen. I LOVE sonnets and have many many here at soup. How about you? I am sure you must have a lot of them to write one this good. Can't wait to see more like this from you!!
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Robert Nehls
Date: 6/2/2014 5:39:00 PM
Hi Andrea. I've only written a couple sonnets but they are a lot of fun and your enthusiasm and positive comments makes me want to write more. It's great to be a part of the poetry soup family. Robert
Date: 5/31/2014 12:51:00 PM
I'm working my way up your small list, Robert. Have you written a lot of poems already , or are you just starting out? Well, let me see this one now!!!
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