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Chrysalis

CHRYSALIS Sitting in silent reverence I gaze upward towards your galaxy... The endless canopy stretched out Before all eyes... An infinite splendor of Light, energy, portals, stars Mysterious unknown spaces Silent notes fill my soul Playing my heartstrings Reminding me of ancient memories Memories of... Our journey together Inside the chrysalis I embrace you... Growing together Intertwined in color and form and design We breathe as one We expand and sprout into life Preparing to fly Birthing at the same moment I reach my moist orange wing Out into the calling air As my outer shell falls away Your wings move slowly Drying in the breeze Twins we are Twin butterflies embarking on Our journey upward Rising and turning we ride The warm air funnels In joy and delight We laugh in our own language As moondust beckons us further We melt into darkness In an instant light is eclipsed I can only see the glow Of your eyes Color is absent Glow...Glitter...Reflection...Shine Orbs of light and time above us Blue Black transparent silk With a million pinholes of light Shining through A nod to the Creator How grand you are How magnificent Everything as it is... Perfect intention and magnitude With alignment of essence To swim in the stars To dive into the Milky Way To ride a comet until its Last breath of light dies There is no greater gift My heart sings and rejoices For the consciousness of This moment in time Looking down on Mother Earth I see her and I love her I see her Creator hold her gently Glittering webs of tears and light Connect us Galaxy and stars and earth... We pulse together We exhale together We bleed together We are one 1/18/2021 COMPLETELY YOUR CHOICE (44) any form any theme Poetry Contest Sponsor:Brian Strand First Place (1 of 3)

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Ink Empress

Date: 10/3/2023 6:25:00 AM

Your title brought me here and i am not at all disappointed! I am utterly in awe and speechless! How beautiful ethereal and soulful is this poem: from the very first line, how you’ve written in a descriptve manner left me going whoa! Especially “To swim in the stars To dive into the Milky Way,To ride a comet until its,Last breath of light dies” wow! The imagery and celestial way you’ve expressed is beyond impeccable! And that ending is so profound. “ we are one” touching, moving write, fave!

Susan Lawrence
Date: 10/11/2023 11:18:00 PM

Dearest Ink Empress , I am late in getting to your amazing comments of love and light . In gratitude for your presence on this journey of words and emotions . To have you along is a gift . Thank you for the presence of you . Honored by the fave . Your words are magical . Big Hugs, Susan :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 6/26/2022 11:11:00 AM

Dearest Susan, the depth and breadth of your expressive imagery and beautiful spirit amazes me. I am in awe of your tender soulful artistry, so full of love. To "swim in the stars, dive into the Milky Way, ride a comet", thank you for taking me on this incredible journey with you. Exquisite moments shared. Your reverence for the Creator and Mother Earth fills me elation and appreciation for your golden presence gracing my heart, soul and imagination. Indeed, "we pulse together, we exhale together, we bleed together, we are one" A fav! You inspire me so, my sweet poetry sister. Warmest wishes and hugs sail to you on butterfly wings.. ~Susan

Susan Lawrence
Date: 6/28/2022 7:01:00 AM

Dearest Susan , Your words touched my heart so very deeply. You innately know what all of this is about, since you have traveled through many lifetimes before. I am equally in awe of you and your work and your words, and your heart which is so full and so expressive and so very eloquent. Thank you my dear Poetry sister for your wonderful comments and your gracious presence in my life and in my poetry I send you wishes of light and beauty on the wings of white hawks forever more. Love and blessings, Susan :)

John Watt

Date: 4/16/2022 10:53:00 PM

Dear friend, what a smile your sublime nature poetry brings to my face and heart. Your spiritual connection with Mother Earth is so evident and your admiration and respect is pervasive in your glorious writes. Butterflies are so beautiful in shape, color, and movement, I can never help but stop what I am doing when I see one flit by. The imagery of a chrysalis broken open to reveal a reborn creature is profound, and your depiction of twins on a journey is a brilliant metaphor of the family of humanity. I love this for SO many reasons, going in my Faves to return to and be inspired by. Easter blessings and hugs ~ John

Susan Lawrence
Date: 4/22/2022 12:36:00 PM

Dear John , I loved reading your poem Joy in the Emptiness… it reminds me of the connection that we both share with nature , Mother Earth, growth, , evolution and rebirth. In gratitude for your participation in my journey . I am so happy to be a part of yours. Thank you ! Your heart and soul and spirit shine through in all of your poems . Happy Earth Day ! Hugs and Blessings, Susan :)

Weston Gregory

Date: 11/30/2021 6:41:00 PM

this piece is anticipatory in form yet a sense of real connection with our environment. i think opening

Susan Lawrence
Date: 4/17/2022 7:22:00 AM

Thank you for your visit Weston . Happy for your presence here . Susan :)

Paul Callus

Date: 11/13/2021 7:51:00 AM

You do not post that often, Susan, but when you do you certainly leave your mark! This is a strikingly beautiful poem which is worth reading more than once. ~ Best regards // paul

Susan Lawrence
Date: 11/13/2021 2:19:00 PM

Paul , Thank you for your visit . I am so happy my poem moved you ! Sending all good thoughts to you . Happy weekend, Susan :)

Laura Leiser

Date: 10/14/2021 12:10:00 PM

The unveiling of creative mystery of chrysalis and nature within the galaxy is sublime in this verse, Susan. Excellent write! :)

Susan Lawrence
Date: 10/16/2021 9:16:00 AM

Laura, Thank you for your visit and lovely comments. Sending all good wishes to you, Susan :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/4/2021 2:53:00 PM

Each piece I have read has been wonderful. You have skills.

Susan Lawrence
Date: 3/5/2021 11:09:00 AM

Richard, ....thank you once again for reading and commenting . In gratitude. I appreciate you. All best, Susan :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/22/2021 7:23:00 AM

You poems are quite aspiring Susan--dwelling in the beauty of nature and universe. Enjoyed the ride with you into the magical space you created with your words.

Susan Lawrence
Date: 2/23/2021 1:31:00 PM

Dear Vijay .. thank you so very much ! I am so happy you could join me on my ride . It’s so nice to have you along ! Enjoying your poems very much ! All best wishes , Susan :)

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 1/23/2021 8:04:00 PM

What a magnificent journey - the butterflies, the stars, the fire, the galaxy, so awe inspiring!

Susan Lawrence
Date: 1/26/2021 11:43:00 AM

Thank you Michelle ! I have really been enjoying reading your poetry. All the best, Susan

David Byrne

Date: 1/21/2021 4:39:00 PM

Nice imagery.

Susan Lawrence
Date: 1/23/2021 5:26:00 PM

Thank you David. Susan :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/19/2021 10:09:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. I just took a trip through the Galaxy and stars with your write. I enjoyed reading your wonderful story/write. Enjoy your win/day with blessings....................

Susan Lawrence
Date: 1/20/2021 8:27:00 AM

Thank you dear Paula ! Happy that my poem moved you. I appreciate your kind words. I look forward to reading your poetry soon !.Susan :)

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 1/18/2021 10:29:00 PM

Back here with congrats on your first place win with this lovely poem dear Susan. Keep inspiring us with more of your beautiful poems. Hugs ~ Ani

Susan Lawrence
Date: 1/20/2021 8:26:00 AM

Dear Ani, Thank you so very much ! I am honored and happy at your return ! Looking forward to more of your inspired poetry as well ! Big hugs, Susan :)

Frederic Parker

Date: 1/18/2021 12:54:00 PM

there's a depth to your thoughts that comes like a sweet breath of scented wisdom dear poet, welcome to PS, I will read more of your poetry

Susan Lawrence
Date: 1/20/2021 1:42:00 PM

Dear Frederick..... Thank you so very much. I enjoy reading your beautiful words of poetry.

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/16/2021 9:19:00 PM

What! Amazing poetry this is, a personification so deep, takes one on a journey throughout life and perfection. Love it. Stay Safe Susan.

Susan Lawrence
Date: 1/18/2021 7:44:00 AM

Harry, Thank you so very much! I am happy my words moved you. A definite journey of life and spirit. You stay safe as well. :) Susan

David Mohn

Date: 1/13/2021 9:47:00 PM

wow...the butterfly metaphor in such a pantheistic brush...beautiful :)

Susan Lawrence
Date: 1/16/2021 7:55:00 AM

David , Thank you ...I am happy my poem moved you. I look forward to reading your poetry ! All best wishes . Susan :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/4/2021 2:34:00 PM

So many ways to interpret this one. At first I thought you had a twin! Then I saw it as more profound, all about the universe and the creator. Splendid imagery!

Susan Lawrence
Date: 1/5/2021 4:44:00 PM

Thank you dear Andrea ! I appreciate your kind words. I look forward to reading more of your poetry! All the best for 2021. Susan

Rico Leffanta

Date: 1/4/2021 11:36:00 AM

What a gift you have for transcribing emotions into words! Congratulations on your win! Aloha 'oe! Rico

Arturo Michael

Date: 1/4/2021 10:20:00 AM

Ok...You're out there already...We're on a planet traveling in outer space... around a sun in the Milky Way...Our time is short...but can be a wonderful experience...Love your writing style...All the best.

Susan Lawrence
Date: 1/5/2021 4:46:00 PM

Thank you dear Arturo . Yes we are here for a short while...a magnificent ride it is ! All the best to you! Susan :)

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 1/3/2021 10:40:00 PM

This is such a LOVELY write Susan... vividly portraying the magnificence of the Creator and His creations. Wishing you a very Happy New Year dear friend. Hugs ~ Ani

Susan Lawrence
Date: 1/4/2021 8:59:00 AM

Thank you dear Ani ! Wishing you all good things for 2021! I look forward to reading more of your poetry. Susan :-)