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Christmas Magic

Cold was the blustery wind driven snow Heaped at my feet as I shook in the squall Relentless ice dancers twirled in show, I grunted and tugged on my thread-bare shawl. “So this is Christmas!” I cursed through my teeth, “Trim out a pine tree in tinsel and light; Make jolly your home by a festive wreath And spare not a thought for my plight.” Shiv’ring I turned, aimed to shuffle away “MISTER!” What person would beckon to me? Alone had I suffered for countless a day Good will to men; t'was a lost fantasy. In spite of my grumbling, I heard them say “Come warm by our hearth, it’s Christmas today!” 12/20/15 For contest: A Christmas Sonnet Acrostic Hosted by: Andrea Dietrich

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Date: 5/7/2016 2:25:00 AM
Hi, 1st I liked the poem good story line. Congrats on the win. Thank you for reading my poems out of more than 30 people who read them you are one of 2 that wrote a comment. Best regards, K River
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Date: 12/25/2015 2:35:00 PM
The GRAHAMBURGLAR, Congratulations on your win :) Merry Christmas and Happy New Year! SKAT
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Date: 12/24/2015 4:21:00 PM
Hey, this was sure an original and COOL Sonnet to read. Though it was not quite iambic pentameter like I wanted, it was excellent in every other way. Congrats in my contest.
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Date: 12/22/2015 12:33:00 AM
Great Acrostic, Grahamburgler, a goodly Dickensian feel to it. I'm sure that it will do well. regards, Viv . Oh, and a Happy Christmas to you and yours :)
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