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Childhood Memories

"How sweet to the heart are the scenes of my childhood" Samuel Woodworth, 1785-1842 my thoughts gathered like seashells on this sand i watch this sun rise a bloodied red sphere lifting from the sea, beneath it i stand i am alone again, it's death i fear yet i hear you whispering through this air a mother's voice now tarries on my ear i close my eyes just to see us all there soft lonely whispers fall through ocean's sound relentless like these moments we now share as time waits for no one, so i have found cherished are the seconds where you reside in childhood memories that now astound on the ocean's edge with you by my side i feel a thunderous roar of my heart wallowing over this pain that i hide i open my eyes as you now depart watching these gulls as their wings spread apart november 22, 2020 Childhood Memories Contest Sponsored by Constance La France

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Date: 4/27/2021 8:08:00 PM
A big big congratulations.. This is well deserved.
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Date: 11/30/2020 11:39:00 AM
Very nice write Sandra. Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Date: 11/29/2020 7:01:00 AM
Hi Sandra, I’m just coming back to say congratulations on your 1st place win:-) Alexis
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Date: 11/29/2020 5:48:00 AM
I see pain in your childhood memories. Congratulations on 1st place, Sandra!
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Date: 11/29/2020 1:26:00 AM
Sandra, congratulations on your win in my Terza Rima Contest with this excellent and emotional poem _Constance
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/29/2020 5:34:00 AM
wow thank you for the placement and your contest and help awakening my muse from her slumber.... hugs
Date: 11/28/2020 6:27:00 PM
A truly amazing piece Sandy, having nice rhyme and good flow too. Also with good imagery and expression too. Great to see you again, blessings and hugs, Gordon
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Date: 11/29/2020 5:35:00 AM
Thank you so much Gordon, my muse was sleeping, surprising to me she woke up and wrote two rhyming poems, she normally stumbles with rhyme... hugs and blessings
Date: 11/28/2020 11:59:00 AM
Congrats on your top win, Sandra! You are special! your poems have a unique flavour to them!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/29/2020 5:36:00 AM
What a kind thing to say Krish... thank you so much... hugs
Date: 11/26/2020 1:25:00 PM
A beautiful write from you Sandy, but then, that's what we've come to expect! (no pressure there eh!)
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Date: 11/29/2020 5:37:00 AM
Thank you John... my muse wrote an offering for your contest as well, as i now know you have seen :) hugs
Date: 11/26/2020 11:26:00 AM
Breathtaking my dear friend - good luck in the contest! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/29/2020 5:38:00 AM
Thank you so much Jennifer... hugs
Date: 11/26/2020 11:01:00 AM
Beautiful poem
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/29/2020 5:38:00 AM
Thank you... hugs
Date: 11/24/2020 8:27:00 PM
I find that the best memories are on the ocean -- they touch all five senses... Such a haunting write, Sandra. Beautiful poesy. Peace and Serenity, Gershon
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Date: 11/29/2020 5:38:00 AM
Thank you Gershon... the ocean is my happy place :) hugs
Date: 11/24/2020 7:49:00 AM
Beautiful childhood memories Sandra, they’re always close to heart. Best wishes for the contest... Belle
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Date: 11/29/2020 5:38:00 AM
Thank you so much Belle :)
Date: 11/24/2020 3:42:00 AM
Hi Sandra, What a well-written sad nostalgic write.Best wishes in the contest. It's so good to see you posting again. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
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Date: 11/29/2020 5:39:00 AM
Thank you Alexis... my muse was sleeping... hugs
Date: 11/24/2020 2:49:00 AM
Such a joy to read, yet so sad beneath the lines... love the poem. Wishing you a win. God bless you
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/29/2020 5:39:00 AM
Thank you so much Regina :) hugs
Date: 11/23/2020 2:58:00 PM
It is easy to see why you were so missed around here, your poetry is some of the best on the site. This as heart touching though a bit sad. But once again, so beautifully crafted. Best wishes my friend.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/29/2020 5:40:00 AM
What a sweet thing to say... i know you are missed around here as well... good to see you around... hugs
Date: 11/23/2020 8:07:00 AM
A melancholy piece on childhood memories filled with much emotion. Beautifully written, Sandy, best of luck in the contest. Hugs, John
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Date: 11/29/2020 5:40:00 AM
Thank you so much... hugs
Date: 11/23/2020 5:27:00 AM
These memories tug the heart--emotive and powerful as always, Sandy.
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Date: 11/23/2020 6:29:00 AM
Thank you so much Vijay... i struggle with rhyme but the theme helped my muse move the thoughts along... hugs
Date: 11/22/2020 11:11:00 PM
Fabulous poem, Sandra. I missed your poetry. Hope you are well. A poem that I am sure will rate high. ~~
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/23/2020 6:28:00 AM
Thank you so much Constance pointed out her contest to me, and although my muse doesn't handle rhyme well i thought i would coax my muse to play... hugs
Date: 11/22/2020 6:36:00 PM
wow, gorgeous came to my mind and I looked down and saw Caren had used that same word. Well, it's TRUE!! Glad you visited me, so I could see your poem here today!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/23/2020 6:27:00 AM
Thank you so much Andrea...i was trying to visit as many of my friends as time allowed :) hugs
Date: 11/22/2020 3:49:00 PM
A gorgeous tribute to childhood.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/23/2020 6:27:00 AM
Thank you so much Caren... the shore is the only place i can go and relive my memories... i can see my family and recall the many trips there... hugs

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