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Cheeseburger Please

i ate the nuts to keep small butts and drank the tea which made me p-- devoured the grains to keep small veins avoided the tarts "be still my heart" now thin and trim down on my knees could i please get a cheeseburger please... Poems by Shar

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Jon A Cavanaugh

Date: 10/19/2013 8:37:00 PM

This put a smile on my face. I could visualize a face book post that I love. A fat cat in the background and a skinny cat in the foreground. The caption "Girl you need a cheeseburger". Enjoyed this poem.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/30/2012 4:07:00 PM

awesome and funny!! Is it for that funny contest?

Brenda Atry

Date: 7/27/2012 4:59:00 PM

Would you like it on a bun? Or would that be too much fun? Your poem has left me smiling! It's slim and trim and totally satisfying! I enjoyed it tremdously.

Sharon Ruebel
Date: 7/29/2012 1:19:00 PM

Thank you Brenda! Haaa just having some fu ..Glad you liked it and thank you for your comments.....Smiles

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/26/2012 5:34:00 PM

to do this rhyme is short counts is an amazing feat, shar... i love cheeseburgers!..:) huggs

Sharon Ruebel
Date: 7/27/2012 3:18:00 PM

Hello Nette, It has been way to long. Hope you are well and doing fine. Just having fun and I to love a cheeseburger once in a great while. Love Always, Shar