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Chatham Ave

I walked down the track in the afternoon, ten years of memories cut in too soon. I started to sweat, I had no room, and overhead a sonic boom. It’s far too early to ask the moon just what the fu-ck am I doing here. We reminisce a thousand times of drinking, swimming, blowing minds. Meeting people, friendships bind sitting under those massive pines. Contemplating, rehearsing lines but can’t you see I don’t want this? Sure, I remember the early days, the barbecues, the summer haze, the rising tides in mangrove bays - constant laughter and bloodshot gaze, but I tell myself it was just a phase... and at thirty-three I’m beyond that. Written: 1993 ——— At the end of Chatham Ave lies a public reserve or park on the shores of the upper Waitemata Harbour in Paremoremo, just north of Auckland in New Zealand. A time and place of no return.

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Date: 3/10/2024 4:06:00 AM
Ah yes, Chatham Ave by the sea. An old haunt of mine but the laughter and bloodshot gaze are a distant memory.
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Date: 1/21/2022 7:23:00 AM
Welcome to Soup. Good memories are the best. I enjoyed your "Chatham Ave." Have a blessed day/weekend..............
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Date: 1/18/2022 5:43:00 AM
Hi Craig...I'm pleasantly impressed by your debut poem on Soup. Reminiscing about the lovely stages of years gone by tends to leave its mark on me, as well! Unfortunately those years will never return. ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 1/13/2022 8:27:00 PM
Memories, we take the good with the bad and moving on, we make headway on this earth. I have asked more than once, what am I doing here? well-done, Craig.
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Date: 1/9/2022 5:32:00 PM
beautifully expressed Craig, welcome to soup:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/7/2022 2:42:00 PM
Many hazy daze and dazy days for me as well. But hey, I wouldn't trade those times for anything. Keep up the great writng, Craig.
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Date: 1/7/2022 5:18:00 AM
A warm welcome to Poetry Soup. NZ was my second home for a couple of years. I enjoyed your first post very much. New year blessings Aloha, Connie
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Date: 1/5/2022 2:13:00 PM
I enjoyed your poem. You painted a nice picture.... Welcome to soup. Write On! Debra
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Date: 1/3/2022 8:25:00 PM
Welcome to Soup! "the rising tides in mangrove bays - constant laughter and the bloodshot gaze" - terrific end rhymes!
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Date: 1/2/2022 9:25:00 AM
We all have those indelible memories, sweet and sad, you have expressed them with vivid imagery....well done! Paulette
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Date: 1/2/2022 6:39:00 AM
Yes, memories can make us smile or CRINGE. I have some I don't enjoy too. This is VERY well written and expressive, Craig! Welcome to PS. Janice
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Date: 1/1/2022 7:39:00 PM
The place that we loved once may not be as thrilling as before when we go there after years ! Your days of frolic enjoyment is now just a memory ! Great poem . Welcome to poetry soup Craig, I too am rather new to this site!
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Date: 1/1/2022 6:18:00 AM
This is incredible! I just love it. I'm so glad you posted it. Happy New Year and God bless you in 2022. Welcome to Poetry Soup. Love, Gina
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