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Chance Encounter

Walking down the avenue working on some things that are on my mind, starting to wonder if I'm just wasting my time. Feeling pretty lonely not sure what to do, when I spotted this lovely Lady just coming into view. She was different than anyone that I had ever knew. She had an amber glow from her head down to her toes, I wondered if there is something wrong with my eyes or was it just my state of mind. Two blocks away walking straight towards me, my eyes locked on her like I was mezmerized, As she got closer my mind was racing thinking what should I do, feeling very shy hopeing a clue would drop on me form out of the sky. Now she was only three feet away, georgeous azure eyes glanced my way, I stood there with my mouth open, couldn't think of one thing to say. She gave me the brightest smile that I have ever seen, brightened up the sky and everything that you could see at least for a mile, such a surreal scene. She reached out and gently touched my face, then she simply vanished without a trace. My heart was racing shipping some beats, then I realized an Angel had just touched me on my face. I felt better than I've felt for oh so many years. I felt so fine it blew my mind had no clue of what was on my mind. Whistling a happy tune I walked on down the avenue wondering If I'll ever see her again, sure hope I do.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/21/2011 9:00:00 PM
I believe that angel is in your future Jack, she would be a lucky one to find you. Hugs, Elizabeth
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Jack Ross Jr.
Date: 9/23/2011 2:28:00 PM
Thank you lovely Lady Elizabeth for your kind comments, much appreciated...with love...old Jack
Date: 9/10/2011 11:31:00 AM
Lovely piece, my friend. Hope you see your angel again : )
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Date: 9/11/2011 2:08:00 PM
Thank you for your kind comments Jack, much appreciated....with love....your mate old Jack
Date: 9/9/2011 2:30:00 AM
Nice experience Jack. Great narrative story. I hope you will see that Angel again! Dalila
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Date: 9/9/2011 3:16:00 PM
Thank you lovely Lady Dalila for your kind comments, much appreciated....with love...old Jack
Date: 9/7/2011 10:12:00 PM
she came to you when you was down and out , touched your face and turned you about.
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Date: 9/7/2011 11:01:00 PM
Thank you sir Louis for your kind comments, much appreciated....your friend....old Jack
Date: 9/4/2011 8:06:00 PM
Can't be me Jack, I have grey eyes. Anyway, I sure hope your angel comes again. She would love this poem!
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Jack Ross Jr.
Date: 9/5/2011 4:08:00 PM
Thank you lovely Lady Elizabeth for your kind comments, much appreciated....with love....old Jack
Date: 9/4/2011 7:56:00 PM
Very romantic and passionate work..Sara
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Jack Ross Jr.
Date: 9/5/2011 4:09:00 PM
Thank you lovely Lady Sara for your kind comments, much appreciated.....with love......old Jack
Date: 9/4/2011 6:40:00 PM
I really enjoy reading your work Jack, keep writing. Love Alexa
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Jack Ross Jr.
Date: 9/4/2011 7:48:00 PM
Thank you lovely Lady Alexa for your kind comments, much appreciated....with love....old Jack

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