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Chainsaw

Helping my father and uncles when I was ten, felled a tree, on break then ready to go again. I walked around the corner of the truck as someone pulled the cord and I got stuck. Now that chainsaw’s engine didn’t start, but it didn’t have to, to rip my skin apart. Right through my jeans, but not too deep, saw my flesh before it began to seep. Dyed my t-shirt like a canvas with the body’s ink, those cells made a mosaic from red to pink. To my surprise, I was left with no pain, but anesthetic’s steel lacked the mercy of the bar chain. Skilled hands drove a cutting needle’s threads through clotting cascades and capillary beds. On my right thigh, a scar’s pledge, for every kind of limb, Stihl has the edge. ---------------------------------------------------------------- Contest: Any Rhyme Form – An Early Childhood Memory Sponsor: Line Gauthier Written: 04.20.18

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Date: 11/4/2020 1:54:00 PM
I burned wood for heat for 13 years, I had a lot of close calls be got very lucky and no accidents.
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Rob Carmack
Date: 11/15/2020 6:07:00 PM
I grew up with wood stoves and still have an old Fisher. The incident did not make me fearful of chainsaws, just made me more careful. Nothing like wood heat on a frigid day
Date: 2/9/2019 8:54:00 PM
This brings memories, Rob ... much of my childhood was spent in the woods, tree houses, blazing miles of dirt bike trails, but also clearing trees and selling cord wood, and I had many a "close call" with my trusty Mac 10-10, one that cut the toe of my boot straight through, but just scraped my flesh, (separated my fingers on my right hand, but that was sheet metal and a different project). I was blessed to be a kid at a time when parents had few worries about kidnapping. Love this write!! :-)
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Rob Carmack
Date: 2/10/2019 11:01:00 AM
I am extremely careful now, including wearing chaps and ear protection. For years, I didn't wear either. The fingers injury with the sheet metal must have been rough.
Date: 6/20/2018 9:03:00 AM
Hi, Rob, just a quick stop here to tell you thanks for seeing my poem. Have a wonderful WEdnesday!
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Date: 4/29/2018 2:28:00 AM
Congrats, Rob, on a wince-inducing write! Regards, Viv
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Rob Carmack
Date: 5/4/2018 8:06:00 PM
TY Viv.
Date: 4/27/2018 1:42:00 AM
wow, it's so great to see you enter a contest here,Rob. This is one of your best. I think the topic really motivated you and it's interesting you chose something painful. those kind stay with us for sure. Congrats. I hope it placed high.
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Rob Carmack
Date: 4/28/2018 1:06:00 AM
I use a chainsaw regularly throughout the year so that played a part in my choice as well. Thank you for reading and commenting.
Date: 4/26/2018 8:29:00 AM
Wow, painful, the experience that is, love the poetry..
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Rob Carmack
Date: 4/26/2018 9:28:00 PM
TY Harry.
Date: 4/25/2018 8:49:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Rob, oh wow!!! falling trees is not a safe job...wonderful poem ..Hugs Eve ~`*
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Rob Carmack
Date: 4/25/2018 10:16:00 PM
Exactly why chaps should be worn, I was lucky the engine didn't start.
Date: 4/25/2018 3:45:00 PM
well done Rob, congrats
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Rob Carmack
Date: 4/25/2018 10:16:00 PM
TY Pixie.
Date: 4/25/2018 3:42:00 PM
That would be a memory very hard to forget, Rob! Well done, and congrats on your podium win. Sandra :)
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Rob Carmack
Date: 4/25/2018 10:17:00 PM
Thank you Sandra.
Date: 4/25/2018 2:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A well-written story. Like the last line.
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Rob Carmack
Date: 4/25/2018 10:14:00 PM
Thanks Susan.
Date: 4/25/2018 9:54:00 AM
Great storytelling, Rob, with a witty wrap. Congrats on your well deserved bronze medal win.
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Rob Carmack
Date: 4/25/2018 2:04:00 PM
Thank you Line for my placement and inspiring this poem.

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