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Chained

"CHAINED" imprisoned by choice scars and bruises my cell mates death follows future abuse is a life sentence the force of love keeps me jailed. walls enclose vast view no-one knows my secret hurts hears sobbed silent cries abuse degrades human soul escape holds no path to run. invisible bars contain emotions red ... raw end is not in sight entrapment stifles breathing a heart denied from beating. *For Black-Eyed Susan's Wrongful Imprisonment or Sentenced Contest. *Oct. 16, 2012.

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Skat A

Date: 3/13/2014 3:10:00 AM

for loves keep.. ~Love you forever my bff....... RIP Sweet Linda-Marie ~SKAT~

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/14/2012 6:02:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in Susan's "Wrongful Imprisonment" contest Linda-Marie. Love, Carol

Len Gasun

Date: 11/12/2012 1:46:00 AM

Great write my dear friend, Linda-M! My hearty congratulations on your awesome win! love/hugs always, Leonora

Joyce Johnson

Date: 11/11/2012 7:22:00 PM

This one is at the top in my book. Well done. Congratulations. Thank you for your kind comments. Love, Joyce

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/11/2012 10:36:00 AM

A very powerful one this is, Linda. Glad to finally be seeing it and congrats in Susan's contest.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/11/2012 10:36:00 AM

Hello Linda my bff... thank you for your sweet comment... :-) Congratulations in Susan's "Wrongful Imprisonment or Sentenced " contest, deep subject... always~ PD

Joseph May

Date: 11/10/2012 6:22:00 PM

congrats on another great win Linda

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/10/2012 5:05:00 PM

WON 4TH PLACE .. THANKXXX.

Seren Roberts

Date: 11/10/2012 10:54:00 AM

The cry of so many...... Well Done...Seren

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 11/10/2012 10:19:00 AM

lovely write. Congratulations on your win friend Linda-Marie :) hugs, Maria

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/20/2012 10:24:00 AM

this is written with such feeling Sweetheart, feelings transfered to here...

Len Gasun

Date: 10/17/2012 4:39:00 PM

Wow!!! Wow!!! This is outstanding! I love the idea here my friend Linda-M. A winner for me! Good luck and best wishes always! love, LG

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/17/2012 1:58:00 PM

I like the way you approached this one, LInda. It inspires me to just make something up since I can't think of doing one based on an actual real person. Sure to do well in the contest.

Bl Devnath

Date: 10/17/2012 10:14:00 AM

Actions and reactions both are influenced to be in jail of love, the matter of heart. Wonderful expression of feeling continues in the state of love. Good luck and loved always, bl

Nicole King

Date: 10/16/2012 5:39:00 PM

Very beautiful poem. Tells how a lot of people feel.

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/16/2012 3:49:00 PM

Wow, what a fantastic write my friend! I really enjoyed how you gave yourself an awful sentence! What a powerful piece, Great Work!!

Russell Sivey
Date: 10/16/2012 3:52:00 PM

I know you didn't really give yourself a sentence my friend, I hope you never suffered abuse of any kind my friend! I was just stating how it was interesting how you put yourself in the shoes of an abused person within this write, how that was a good way to approach the contest!

Rachel St.Cross

Date: 10/16/2012 2:25:00 PM

‡ Also I Failed To Mention, Sweet Beautiful Linda, Thank You, For Your Radiant Beauty's Priceless Visit. I Do See 'Your Beautiful Eyes,' Within Every Line. My Love, Rachel ‡

Rachel St.Cross

Date: 10/16/2012 2:15:00 PM

‡ This Is Sooo Extremely Sad. Cast Into This Vast Sea Of Endlessly Strewn Sorrows, My Dear Sweet Beautiful, Beautiful Linda Marie. Your Poetic Treasures Gifted As They Be, Brush Quite A Somber Canvas Reflecting These Colours Amid Countless Others; Dipped In The Blue Black Gray Palettes Of Their Lust, Power And Greed. Vapourless Clouds Arrayed In Golden Cloaks; A Five And Dimes Drop In Time. Tis Again, Why I Love You! Your Majestic Poetry; Flames As Passions, Torching Heart's. My Love, Rachel ‡

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/16/2012 1:40:00 PM

ABUSE OF ANY KIND IS AN AUTOMATIC JAIL SENTENCE FOR SO MANY .. WE PRAY FOR ALL WHO FEEL THEY NEED TO ENDURE ABUSE POETS .. LUV ..