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For those who observe Good Friday, may God fill your heart with the hope of the resurrection The crowd is mixed - some on their knees, some raise their fists, some sob their pleas. Who is this man whose flesh is torn... what was his crime to cause such scorn? Why do sharp thorns torment his head when only words of love were said? Why do my nails now splinter hands that brought compassion to this land? Where goes the sun in midday rain - as though the heavens weep in pain? Where are your friends (as cold winds blow) who hailed you king five days ago? Why not apply your godly power to save yourself in your dark hour? Yet as I mock he looks at me - no guile nor hate, just sympathy. This cold wind chills me to the bone, and yet his warmth has found a home. Where goes the sun in midday rain? I pray this Son will rise again. Written 14 April 2022

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Date: 5/9/2022 10:01:00 PM
"Yet as I mock he looks at me - no guile nor hate, just sympathy"...... This is our savior ! He is kindness and compassion incarnate. John, you have told this true in such a simple and fluid manner and so touchingly . This goes into my Fav. May the resurrected Christ bless you in abundance !
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Date: 5/10/2022 10:31:00 AM
Valsa, grateful for your touching comment and for the honor of a Fav from you! Yes, this is our Savior. Even on the cross He was full of compassion. Thank you, and God bless your day ~ John
Date: 4/27/2022 1:50:00 AM
You have told this story with such depth of emotion John. That feeling that rushes through the bodies of believers who have been taught from birth and to those who accept Jesus as their personal savior for the first time as the Centurion did. This magnificent poem has moved me deeply and I am saving it in my Faves. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 4/27/2022 8:02:00 AM
Thank you dear friend for taking this journey with me back in time to that dark day. We know now that it was a necessary part of God's plan, but it must not have felt that way then. The emotions I feel are indeed deep; thank you for allowing me to spill them on the page and for letting me know they moved you as well, and I'm grateful for the Fave. Blessings to you ~ John
Date: 4/26/2022 12:45:00 PM
I am so happy for this Centurion who saw Christ suffer and die on the cross and who became a believer at the foot of the cross The last verse very touching John. Hugs, blessings, Jennifer. j
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Date: 4/26/2022 9:49:00 PM
Thank you, my dear friend for all the wonderful comments today. You are always so good at discerning what my poems are trying to communicate, and your encouragement is so appreciated. God bless you and yours. Blessings and hugs ~ John
Date: 4/22/2022 3:49:00 PM
Fantastic, John. This one I like even more than the sonnet. Seeing it from this man's cynical view. A fave.
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Date: 4/24/2022 6:45:00 PM
Thank you very much for the fave and kind words, Andrea.
Date: 4/18/2022 6:40:00 PM
This is beautifully penned, John. Hope you had a blessed Easter. Peace, Gershon
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Date: 4/19/2022 10:21:00 PM
Thank you for the blessing of your friendship, dear Gershon. I value the sincerity and respect with which you honor my faith writings. You are a role model. Divine Passover blessings ~ John
Date: 4/15/2022 3:53:00 PM
PS Love the pic. JB
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Date: 4/24/2022 6:44:00 PM
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Date: 4/15/2022 3:52:00 PM
WoW! Super write John. Excellent Easter poem which brings home the suffering and death of Our Lord as He took our place on the cross. The agonies He suffered amaze me as does His sheer bravery in the face of such horror. I think on these things every year at this time. He is my Hero. And this poem is a fave for me. God Bless and Happy Easter to you and yours. JB
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Date: 4/19/2022 10:18:00 PM
Judy, this time of year is a time to contemplate many things about the Lord and what He went through and His utter selflessness. Thank you for stopping by to read and comment, and for the fave. God bless ~ John
Date: 4/14/2022 7:09:00 PM
John, this is an excellent glimpse of "Good Friday" events. The short lines emphasize the raw emotions expressed by the centurion. I really like this! Going in my fav's. Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 4/19/2022 10:15:00 PM
Kim, thank you very much for coming by for a visit, and for leaving behind your encouraging thoughts and supportive words. Grateful for the fav... blessings ~ John
Date: 4/14/2022 2:42:00 PM
It was only after he was crucified that they realised that he was indeed a king On Easter Sunday we again celebrate the resurrection of the one true God. Happy Easter to you and your family John. Tom
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Date: 4/14/2022 3:46:00 PM
Happy Easter to you and your family as well, Tom. It took me a long time to understand why the day was referred to as 'Good Friday', but now I see that without it we would not have an Easter Sunday to celebrate. Thank you for the read and comment ~ John
Date: 4/14/2022 1:35:00 PM
Your words of faith invoke the story dear to many hearts. I feel the solemn worship and gratitude in your elegy, John. Excellent write, as always.
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Date: 4/14/2022 3:45:00 PM
Thank you Vijay for understanding the depth of emotions involved in this critical day of the Christian calendar. I so appreciate and value your feedback as a highly admired poet. Blessings ~ John
Date: 4/14/2022 12:57:00 PM
Risen to His Father's right hand and will return when His Father says, "It's time." You have such an eloquent style of writing, John, asking your reader to comprehend and acknowledge what your lines carefully omit. Wonderful skill you have with your pen.
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Date: 4/14/2022 3:42:00 PM
Jenna, thank you for understanding the omission... there is certainly more to this story than the uncertainty at the ending. I will be posting again in the next few days to help flesh out the Good Friday account. I am sincerely grateful for your careful reads and supportive comments, not to mention your excellent poetry. Just yesterday I was re-reading your prayer poem "Giving Godly Grace", which I keep a copy of at my workplace to help keep my attitude right and my faith strong. Thank you ~ John

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