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Written - 6th May 2024

Celestial stars in the sky appear A faithful, exquisite crystal sphere Visibly there for the world to scan Created by the Miracle Man. Angels of the night, dainty dancers The light fandango for romancers Stars are for lovers and dreamers too In your eyes they’re twinkling just for you. Stars are a wonder, gracing the night Showcasing seraphic paradise Should you find yourself lost and alone Stars will guide you safely back to home. Stars are made from God's Heavenly grace Meaning so much to those who have faith Reach up and catch a bright falling star Hold it close in heart where'er you are.

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Panagiota Romios

Date: 5/18/2024 9:19:00 PM

So beautiful Beryl Pangie Romios

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 5/18/2024 11:49:00 PM

Thank you Pangie, very much… Beryl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/14/2024 4:14:00 PM

Ahh this is so sweet. A real charmer, Beryl

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 5/14/2024 4:39:00 PM

Thank you Andrea… Beryl

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/9/2024 6:12:00 AM

A lovely piece.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 5/10/2024 7:18:00 PM

Thank you Richard… Beryl

Buhagiar Victor

Date: 5/6/2024 10:08:00 PM

You remind me of my youth when hiking at night, we would study the Ursa minor. A lovely poem on the stars.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 5/7/2024 5:32:00 PM

Thank you Victor, there’s something magical about a stroll beneath the stars and the moon at night. Blessings, Beryl

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 5/6/2024 4:48:00 PM

Loved the imagery and fluidity of your poem, Beryl. I liked the imagery in this line: Angels of the night, dainty dancers Dainty dancers is a wonderful image. Your poem was 'other worldly' and a delight to read. Have a pleasant evening, hugs, Sara

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 5/7/2024 5:29:00 PM

Thank you very much Sara, I’m very grateful to you. Have a wonderful evening too. Hugs returned, Beryl

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/6/2024 8:35:00 AM

Delightfully dwelling in celestial wonder--much enjoyed the cosmic journey lauding paradise of stars. Excellent depiction, Beryl.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 5/7/2024 5:26:00 PM

Thank you very much Vijay, so pleased you enjoyed the read. Beryl

Silent One

Date: 5/6/2024 7:08:00 AM

A lovely poem.. Great flow as always..

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 5/7/2024 5:25:00 PM

Thank you Silent One, appreciated as always.Beryl

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 5/6/2024 5:27:00 AM

Dear Beryl, What an enchanting allure of the celestial realm with such grace and reverence. I felt each stanza was like an invitation to gaze upon the heavens and find solace in their timeless beauty. I loved the celestial journey of faith and wonder. - Blessings, Daniel

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 5/7/2024 5:23:00 PM

Thank you Daniel, it’s wonderful to gaze up at the stars on a clear night and yes they do have timeless beauty. Blessings in return. Beryl