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Celebrate May With a Triolet

Are you here, bright emerald May, Fifth month of this advancing year, On whose green sward blown blossoms lay? Are you here, bright emerald May. Do you feel the now warming day, When swans from winter nests appear? Are you here, bright emerald May, Fifth month of this advancing year? 05/03/19 For Contest 'Celebrate May with a Triolet' sponsored by Andrea Dietrich

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Line Gauthier

Date: 5/17/2019 2:23:00 PM

Charming triolet, Barry. Congrats on your win.

Barry Stebbings
Date: 5/19/2019 4:26:00 PM

Thank you very much, Line. // Barry

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/15/2019 5:56:00 PM

I love the celebratory tone of this poem. Very well done, Barry. Congrats in my contest.

Barry Stebbings
Date: 5/16/2019 5:46:00 AM

Thank you very much for my win, Andrea. Spring in the U.K. can be cold and wet, hence the quizzical expression. // Barry

Hilo Poet

Date: 5/13/2019 12:49:00 PM

A gem of a triolet sharing here Barry, Aloha wk

Barry Stebbings
Date: 5/14/2019 1:46:00 PM

Thank you very much, William. // Barry

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/4/2019 7:07:00 PM

enchanting read.. i hope spring is already around, barry... well done; huggs

Barry Stebbings
Date: 5/5/2019 5:46:00 AM

Thank you Nette. Still waiting for Winter to release her chilling grasp. // Barry

Judy Ball

Date: 5/3/2019 5:01:00 PM

Like Heidi we are still waiting in Alberta for things to warm up. It seemed everything was turning green and then we had a blizzard. It finally melted again and now it's cloudy and sprinkling rain but at least it isn't snow. Good job here though. May in Alberta is better much better than March. Beautifully written and great description. God Bless, JB

Barry Stebbings
Date: 5/4/2019 12:28:00 PM

Thank you very much Judy. May here is often full of blossom and bright sunshine but still intensely cold. // Barry

Heidi Sands

Date: 5/3/2019 12:50:00 PM

Beautifully written! Still waiting for it to warm up here :)

Barry Stebbings
Date: 5/4/2019 12:26:00 PM

Thank you Heidi, cold here as well. // Barry