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Causalities

Causalities They lay in this bone box Graves of the done. Friends of pushed dissolution. They express some guilt But ran with spent nerves I back to my institutions. This all from dual-polar, my black and white mind They witnessed my next reaction Always peeks and gullies Not plains, they live with A place without my intrusion. Tiered of phone woe Then the coin next day flip In giddy bounce, more irritation. As I watch this new love die Like this tear as it runs Promise to keep on prescriptions

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Date: 4/1/2010 2:37:00 PM
sorry i haven't had alot of time to read( had to sell my pc) but this poem is great. and you say i have talent i loved it. the begining mademe think of dead soldiers and i really loved the last stanza
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Date: 3/27/2010 12:25:00 PM
Hang in there, Johnathon. Prayers coming your way! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/24/2010 11:16:00 AM
This is a very potent write, Johnathon. Hope you don't really have to cope with bipolar afflictions, but staying on the meds can help a lot. It's great to see you posting again, my friend. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/24/2010 7:38:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your awesome poetry this morning Johnathon. Thank you for sharing it. Hoping you have a wonderful day filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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