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Cats and Hats

my attempt at a simplistic limerick suite thank you "cats and hats" I once went to the beach with hats and noticed in the back seat were my cats I couldn't leave them in the car so we ended up sitting at the bar later I placed them on cool mats we stayed until the sun went down in between they managed to be a clown they nestled and played with my hats in style as true diplomats now for all it was a showdown as our day was nearing end we were happy and could not pretend my cats were never alone my love and patience had grown but now my hats I need to mend SkyWatcher 06-17-23

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Bill Baker

Date: 6/22/2023 2:39:00 PM

Those naughty cats, messing with your hats. But then again, cats will be cats! Very creative poetry, Lisa. A three verse limerick ... kudos my friend, well done. A fun read in excellent form. Write On! Your Texas friend and fellow poet, Bill

Lisa Ricci
Date: 6/23/2023 2:34:00 AM

Good Morning Bill. Hi. You are too kind. Thank you ever so much. I know this entry was very simplistic with fluff and stuff but it was an exercise to stay active because my mind is mush. As I told others, I mean no disrespect to the sonnets villanelles or the chant royals. Have a wonderful morning and weekend too. I will see you soon on your page. Thank you for the smile of your commentary... Blessings always (smile)

Anil Deo

Date: 6/21/2023 11:42:00 AM

I love you are having fun writing, Lisa. That's poetry, that's living poetry. Inhad funaroynd 1999, using nursery rhymes with my "kids poems "

Lisa Ricci
Date: 6/22/2023 3:07:00 AM

Thank you Thank you Thank you Anil. Truly. Hello. I know this is beyond simplistic filled with fluff and stuff but what can I say... My condolences to all the sonnets villanelles and chant royals (truly). Thank you also for sharing your story of nursery ryhmes. Keep safe and well Anil. Love and Blessings now and always along with the ever popular Shalom and Namaste ( he he he and smile smile smile)

Paul Callus

Date: 6/21/2023 3:52:00 AM

Oh dear! I know many women adore their hats (apart from dresses, shoes....an endless list) :) :) but our Lisa also loves pets, so she takes this hats/cats episode all in her stride. Warm regards, my friend // paul

Lisa Ricci
Date: 6/22/2023 2:46:00 AM

Hello Paul. Good Morning. You have me smiling and laughing with your review and commentary. Thank you for that. Truly. My mind is once again elsewhere so I wrote this very simplistic silly entry of fluff and stuff. Thus my apologies to all the sonnets villanelles chant royals etc. As always, thank you for being so gracious and generous. Now about those cats and hats (smile smile smile and ha ha ha) Have a wonderful morning and day. Blessings always...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/20/2023 1:04:00 PM

haha. Good ending. I bet cats can do a real number on hats!! Especially if they had feathers on them.

Lisa Ricci
Date: 6/22/2023 2:29:00 AM

Good Morning Andrea. Hi. I'm sorry for this late response. Thank you very much for being so gracious. I am smiling at your comments. My mind is elsewhere so I wrote in simplistic terms of fluff and stuff, Have a wonderful morning and day. Thank you again. Blessings always (smile)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 6/17/2023 11:54:00 AM

Hello Lisa, it is better to get new hats instead of mending them. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene\

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/17/2023 3:21:00 PM

Hello Lisa, it is nice to see you again. You are very welcome. I will and you have a nice night to. /Darlene\

Lisa Ricci
Date: 6/17/2023 12:52:00 PM

Hello Darlene. Thank you very much. So nice to see your name once again. Have a wonderful night and weekend. May this day find you well. (smile)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/17/2023 7:41:00 AM

I hope you would have read my romantic tale. Oh well. Your limericks are very well constructed. - smiles though in pain.

Lisa Ricci
Date: 6/17/2023 8:09:00 AM

Hi Victor. I don't know what happened. I tried earlier when I went to your page. I just tried again now with hopes it went through. Your entry is most beautiful and poetic with all elements attached. Thank you for seeing this silly little entry of fluff and stuff. It was my attempt at a limerick suite. Have a wonderful night. Love and Blessings now and always. (smile)