Category 3

Respirator walls Blinding flashes of blue light Swirling mass of cloud

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Constance La France

Date: 2/21/2011 6:48:00 AM

I am sending you a soup mail in a moment~~

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 10/19/2008 2:53:00 PM

Thank you for your comment, Joe. As usual it is much appreciated !:) Alrightee, I did comment on this one before, t'is a very unsettling piece, only that it vividly describes something that might feel menacing. Nicely done..I do hope all is well with you! I have been coming in to see if you'd posted something recent..I'm sure you will, but it will come on its own, at precisely the right moment! Take care, Joe..wishing the best to you and yours! Mikki:)

Deneen White

Date: 10/18/2008 2:30:00 PM

category 3, I am thinking stormy weather, and high seas, few words powerful image, nice write take care D-nyce