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Carnations and Roses Premiere Contest Winner

Take carnations tender child till the hand hardens holding thorns beneath petals without crying chasing kites butterflies rainbows colors dazzling from dawn splendor to the scarlet gold horizon dreaming castles treasure islands pearls and corals sparkling juggling stars with cherubs smiling on moon slice gliding through snow lit Christmas galaxies blue and red shimmering till clock hands on rose stop thorns of time piercing time to pay love with love with or no applause melting ego in us ocean in God's help trusting when too heavy grown for parents His strong arm holding you spreading charity lighting path with God's love pace and joy unending Gold Trophy Winner: Brian Strand-Your Option-2/2/24 Fourth Place Winer: Brian Strand Premiere 1204-3/30/23 First Place Winner: Brian Strand-All Yours-2/4/21 First Place Winner: Brian Strand-All Yours-11/1/20 Fourth Place: Julie Leigh Rodeheaver-Roses And Carnations-10/11/17

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Date: 2/3/2024 12:51:00 PM
Congrats on your winning poem. Love the focus on depending and trusting God as a child. J
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Date: 2/3/2024 1:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning work in Brian's contest. Way to go. Sara K
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Date: 2/2/2024 8:38:00 PM
Beautiful verse! Warmest congratulations on your trophy win, Frances
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Date: 2/5/2021 3:49:00 PM
Frances, congratulations on your win in Brian's All Yours contest with this excellent poem, well done _Constance
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Date: 11/1/2020 12:24:00 PM
Creative lines penned. Way to go in the contest. Congrats. Sara
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Date: 5/23/2020 9:31:00 PM
Love your imagery and love the short lines that focus attention on every aspect of your brilliant message. Well done, Frances.
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Date: 10/13/2017 11:25:00 PM
Congratulations on your well-earned win in Julie's contest, Frances - keep up the great writing! :-)
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Date: 10/11/2017 7:44:00 PM
Frances, congratulations on your win!
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Date: 10/11/2017 7:41:00 PM
Frances, beautiful, congratulations on your win !
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Date: 10/11/2017 4:41:00 PM
Back with congrats Frances!
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Date: 10/10/2017 4:40:00 PM
a very unique take on the flower theme, good luck:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 10/7/2017 11:08:00 AM
A quite original take on the theme--a creative embrace of carnations and roses--best for a win Frances!
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