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Captured Vision

Shiny pink colored lips, parted so slight. Warm, soft exhales, recognized on a cold winters night. While traces of silver glitter dance and dart with the moons glow, the moment of this captured vision, a mere second, yet slow. The smallest of details only noticed by you, forever remaining in your heart, and your mind too.

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Date: 12/22/2019 11:02:00 PM
Beautiful vision. Nice emphasis on the details.
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Kenneth Brenner
Date: 1/21/2020 3:58:00 AM
I'm sorry Juliet..slow reply..I'm a "duh"..sometimes..ty so much for your expressed comment..I value opinions and am grateful I recieve them..again thankyou..Bless u always.
Date: 12/17/2019 5:55:00 AM
Best wishes and congratulations on your Honorable Mention in Brian's contest, Kenneth - keep the ink flowing, my friend! Blessings! :o)
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Kenneth Brenner
Date: 12/18/2019 9:08:00 PM
Thankyou Gregory, thanku much..God Bless you always my friend.

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