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Can You Feel It

Take a deep breath and feel the music around you, drumming are beating, ears eating the sounds surround you, Can you feel it? can you feel it? Can you feel it in your blood... it's moving, Inhale the harmony, it's soothing, soothing... Let's speed it up, speed up, quickening the tempo, feel it baby let's go... oh oh ... oh oh... Palms up, hair down, feel the music all around, reach like branches, reach for the sky, shake your hands up wave the ground goodbye, Now fly...fly... Take a deep breath and feel the music around you, hear the electronic harmonic sounds surround you, Can you feel it, can you feel it? can you feel it in your blood... it's moving Inhale the harmony, it's soothing, soothing... Rock your body like grass in the breeze, tap your toes and bend your knees, shimmy back shoulders, arch back sway, feel the music in your own kinda way... Take a deep breath and feel the music around you, guitar strings moan, let the motion surround you. can you feel it? can you feel it? Language in the lyrics and love in the spirits, open your mind and hear it, hear it. Take a deep breath and feel the music around you, move your body it motion let it define you. just be you..ooo... just be you..ooo

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Date: 6/19/2018 7:20:00 AM
This one is excellent! I love it! Congratulations :)
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Date: 6/15/2018 8:49:00 AM
I see congrats are in order. Well done, hugs Rick.
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Date: 6/15/2018 1:43:00 AM
Congrats on your win.. you bet I feel it girl! Write me a song I can echo!!
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Casarah Nance
Date: 6/15/2018 7:18:00 AM
Hey there, thanks a lot. I'll try to get some lyrics to play along to :)
Date: 6/14/2018 11:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this awesome dance... I could feel it. Creative and well done!
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Casarah Nance
Date: 6/15/2018 7:17:00 AM
Thank you Susan :)
Date: 6/10/2018 5:27:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Casarah, great dance and great poem. :))
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Casarah Nance
Date: 6/15/2018 7:17:00 AM
Thank you Roy
Date: 6/9/2018 11:07:00 PM
Congrats on your fun write and well deserved win, Casarah.
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Casarah Nance
Date: 6/15/2018 7:16:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 6/3/2018 9:15:00 AM
Yep I can feel it Casarah. As always you rock. Hugs Rick.
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Casarah Nance
Date: 6/15/2018 7:08:00 AM
Thanks always my friend. Hugs
Date: 5/21/2018 5:39:00 PM
Hey Cas, this is a cool write...I feel it, glad you're back...in style!
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Casarah Nance
Date: 6/15/2018 7:07:00 AM
I'll try to be back when I can. I've missed words. Thanks. Hugs
Date: 5/21/2018 3:50:00 PM
wooohoo Cas you sure have got the beat and the rhythm flowing:-) so good to see you back posting:-) hugs Jan xx
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Casarah Nance
Date: 5/21/2018 5:14:00 PM
thanks, i'm trying to find more time now. missed ya . hugs

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