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Came Alot

Queen Guinevere was quite a sight When Arthur returned from a fight He looked up and down Then said with a frown, "You look like you've had a rough knight!" Arthur opened the bedroom door Where clothes lay all over the floor "This looks rather bad," Said Sir Gal He Had, "I've mistaken your wife for an whore." There's more to the story than that The Kingdom of Arthur fell flat But Queen Guinevere Did not shed one tear For she loved to give tit for tat!

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Rebecca Young

Date: 8/26/2022 8:49:00 AM

Love your inappropriate humor. Your colloquialisms and limericks delight me to no end. Many thanks.

Rico Leffanta
Date: 8/26/2022 10:24:00 AM

Mahalo nui loa, Rebecca! Thank you for reading and commenting! Aloha!

Speaks Volumes

Date: 7/30/2022 7:27:00 PM

Your Humor is clever. The story your poem tells is vivid, and funny. An excellent combination.

Rico Leffanta
Date: 7/31/2022 6:23:00 PM

Mahalo nui loa! Aloha!

Margarita Lillico

Date: 3/18/2022 12:23:00 PM

Got the best of yours and the first one is LOL! Tit-for-tat :))) M.

Rico Leffanta
Date: 3/18/2022 12:26:00 PM

Mahalo nui loa, Margarita! Aloha!

Ann Peck

Date: 9/12/2021 7:56:00 AM

HaHa! You are so funny, Rico. A great story and beautiful rhyming! An A+ Excellent! Aloha.

Rico Leffanta
Date: 9/12/2021 11:11:00 AM

I am surprised you found this, but thank you for reading and commenting! Aloha! Rico

Marcela Proust

Date: 3/11/2021 4:41:00 PM

Aloha! Thank you for commenting on one of my poems, so I'm paying respects to one of yours; but not as much tot for tat as in this poem hahaha. When I read the title I wasn't sure what I was getting in to, but your word plays are great; a true laugh. Very enjoyable. Thank you. Aloha!

Nora Gibson

Date: 3/3/2021 4:16:00 PM

a fav.,.you are very witting ..I love it

Rico Leffanta
Date: 8/26/2022 10:25:00 AM

Mahalo, Nora! Aloha!

Susan Lawrence

Date: 9/6/2020 8:54:00 AM

I love this Rico !! You are so good with rhymes and words and perfectly melded content ! Lots of laughter. Thank you !

Rico Leffanta
Date: 9/6/2020 11:27:00 AM

Thank you for reading and commenting! I am quite impressed with the following you have acquired with only TWO poems on this site! Well done, indeed! Aloha! Rico

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 7/30/2018 9:48:00 PM

Hello Rico … a great play on words. Thanks for the chuckle Rico - Lindsay

Rico Leffanta
Date: 7/31/2018 5:01:00 PM

Mahalo nui loa! Too depressing to continue writing Limericks about Trump! Aloha! Rico

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 7/30/2018 1:24:00 PM

I love it when I'm laughing before I open the poem, and you went exactly where I was hoping you would ;p gotta fave this one!!! Aloha Rico! :)) xomo

Rico Leffanta
Date: 7/31/2018 5:00:00 PM

Mahalo nui loa, Maureen! Your encouragement is always appreciated! Aloha! Rico