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Callous

Corrosion of feelings”, the accusation said. A seal, a signature. I was a bit confused, though, when the judge, a heavyset gentleman with a kind red face, rose from his seat and cuddled me. - What's your last wish, son? - he asked me sweetly. No wishes. - Come on, - he insisted. - Ask the audience, fifty-fifty or call a friend? The subconscious thirst for feeling things the way normal humans do tries to turn even nothingness into something resembling human, to give weight to weightlessness, to attach sense to nonsense, so it was not surprising that they caught me by surprise when I saw the prosecutor's face contort: he was crying. I can imagine how the executioner will be upset to align me a little – a local euphemism. Poor butcher! you are so callous - he'll tell me slightly later feeling my thin neck 31.08.2019 Ten Word Challenge 1 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Kai Michael Neumann

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Date: 9/3/2019 1:48:00 PM
You are so talented at giving us the unexpected Kurt. I loved this and the way you finished it. I am sure this impressive entry will be recognized and awarded! : ) xxoo
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Kurt Ravidas
Date: 9/3/2019 2:33:00 PM
Thank you very much, Connie. I hope you will also take part in this funny competition)
Date: 9/3/2019 7:40:00 AM
This has an interesting feel! So well done! A fave, Kurt!
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Date: 9/3/2019 2:33:00 PM
Oh,thank you, Kim)
Date: 9/2/2019 8:55:00 PM
Not an easy read (to me), the flippancy is profound and grabbed me, then came an off the wall philosophical spill to further hold me enthralled inside your emotionally rolling profoundly bouncing ball. I had a good time, I enjoy dizzy! Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Date: 9/2/2019 5:22:00 PM
Rewrote that story.
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