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Calliope and the Chimera

Concentric ripples form as I skip rocks in the twilight As I ponder plain spoken words that became recondite I detect notes of Frangipani as a sultry sylph speaks I break bread in ancestral lands in awe at the mystique Soon, a great avian menagerie gathers all around Mockingbirds mimic the mage's mellifluous sounds The luscious beauty's words go from pellucid to obscure I sit diffident yet dissolute while gazing at the demure The vermilion bird flies around looking for a perch to choose Withholding its succor until it finds the right muse to infuse

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Date: 1/12/2018 8:36:00 AM
Very well done Trey, congratulations for such a worthy entry...
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Trey Hamner
Date: 1/13/2018 11:21:00 AM
Thank you very much Charlie.
Date: 1/12/2018 12:20:00 AM
Very nicely done Trey.
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Trey Hamner
Date: 1/13/2018 11:21:00 AM
Thank you James.
Date: 1/11/2018 7:09:00 PM
A fantastic write Trey. Congratulations for your wonderful first place win. ~Susan
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Date: 1/11/2018 8:03:00 PM
Thank you Susan, I appreciate it.
Date: 1/11/2018 7:09:00 PM
Awesome write Trey!!! Congratulations on your first place win !!! ~Judy
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Trey Hamner
Date: 1/11/2018 8:02:00 PM
Thank you very much Judith.
Date: 1/11/2018 6:13:00 PM
Brilliant, congratulations on your win! Best wishes for 2018, Mick
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Trey Hamner
Date: 1/11/2018 8:02:00 PM
Thanks very much Mick, you as well.
Date: 1/11/2018 5:29:00 PM
Wow, so good! Congrats on your win, Trey :)
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Trey Hamner
Date: 1/11/2018 8:02:00 PM
Thank you Laura.
Date: 1/11/2018 5:05:00 PM
I LOVE the last line, Trey. Congrats on your win.
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Trey Hamner
Date: 1/11/2018 8:00:00 PM
Thanks Line, I appreciate it. :)
Date: 1/11/2018 3:52:00 PM
Hi Trey, You did real with the given words. Congrats on your 1st place win:-) Alexis
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Trey Hamner
Date: 1/11/2018 7:58:00 PM
Thank you Alexis.
Date: 1/11/2018 3:22:00 PM
I enjoyed this . Congratulations :)
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Trey Hamner
Date: 1/11/2018 7:58:00 PM
Thank you Heidi.
Date: 1/11/2018 2:26:00 PM
Loved your take on the contest, some great lines, especially the second couplets... Congratulations on your first place in the 10/10 challenge..
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Trey Hamner
Date: 1/11/2018 7:55:00 PM
Thank you, I loved the theme/idea for the contest, great job.
Date: 1/11/2018 10:00:00 AM
I love the imagery on the first line. Trey, your couplets are great and end well, ... LINDA
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Trey Hamner
Date: 1/11/2018 7:53:00 PM
Thank you very much, Linda. :)

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