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Butterfly

Please don't look at me for I am not what you see my wings are still wet

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Daver Austin

Date: 7/20/2016 4:09:00 PM

Metamorphosis. Good natural Haiku. A little of the Japanese in this one, yes? Congrats, daver

Sandi Maddox Hoot
Date: 7/20/2016 9:01:00 PM

Thank u:) have a beautiful night

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/22/2016 8:10:00 AM

- Welcome Sandi - A great haiku .... I love haiku poems - hugs // Sun :)

Sandi Maddox Hoot
Date: 7/20/2016 9:02:00 PM

Thank u- and I needed that hug:) been a rough day

Lenny Gazbowski

Date: 4/18/2016 11:01:00 PM

Your words have an esoteric feel to them Sandi, I read this over and over, beautiful.

Sandi Maddox Hoot
Date: 7/20/2016 9:02:00 PM

Thank u:)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/18/2016 6:56:00 PM

Wow, love the haiku and sadness...Linda

Dana Redricks

Date: 4/18/2016 2:57:00 PM

Hello, Sandi; I tried to send this message to you Mail inbox, but it wouldn't allow me to send it, so I sent here message below. Hello, Sandi; do you have Microsoft Word? If you do always write your poetry and save it, and also all material that is posted on Poetry Soup is copy written, and published. They should have their policy on their copy write, and privacy policies.

Sandi Maddox Hoot
Date: 4/18/2016 5:20:00 PM

Thank you so much!

Dana Redricks
Date: 4/18/2016 2:59:00 PM

I like your poem Sandi and symbolic message.

Christopher Goss

Date: 4/18/2016 2:46:00 PM

Very nice poem.

Sandi Maddox Hoot
Date: 4/18/2016 5:20:00 PM

Thank you!